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WIDERGEBURT Act III: Chapter 26

🕑 Added 2019-12-12 18:12:51 +0000 UTC

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I love how Eryk completely went you must die now .

Robert Phipps Jr (Perren d'Wolff)

Another great option

Daniel Glasson

I pictured Kensei Ma from Kenichi

Illiterate Scholar

In the first line of this chapter, I think "ridged" should have been "rigid."

Please don't worry about it. I'll scour through my documents and see if I can find it. If not, no worries. 🙂

Chief 37

it would probably be missed. only reason i picked it up is because it said something like 6 months previously and i was thinking he was sent on the mission later as a punishment by Hilda. Didn't think much more of it till i read the part above about years. I just looked through and couldnt find it though. it wasn't at the ball. It wasn't when they went with Cat and Marko on the trip to the Ruins. its entirely possible i just imagined it at this point. apologies.

I don't think there is anything wrong with that. And I'm glad you can come back to this. It's fine. If there was something like this in my story, I can look through my manuscripts and fix it up. While it might be something that slips under the radar for most people, I like making my story as clean and free of inconsistencies as possible. Thank you for pointing this out to me.

Chief 37

i am out of things that have caught my interest. into the cultivator/wuxia story lines right now and am also between all the authors i follow. a few of the other books i have tried via KU have seemed flat and one dimensional and utterly disappointing lately. so i am re reading all my favorites right now. as for above, I was letting you know since i know how much you respond to all comments. I would need to go back and find it, but since i do not have an easy way to search it might take a bit.

I'm kinda surprised you're out of stuff to read. Is this an inconsistency in the story, or are you asking a question? If it is an inconsistency, I'd like to go back and fix it.

Chief 37

so i have gone back to re read everything because i am surprisingly out of other things to read at the moment. for timeline. above you said the party at Cateryna several years ago. I cant remember which chapter exactly but previously I believe Kari was talking to Cateryna or her mother about a birthday party 6 months before when the incident occured. unfortunately i do not have an easy way to search and be sure though. I only remember because it made me add up how long he was in the mountains on his assignment.

The perverted panty-stealing grandmaster of the Anything Goes Martial Arts? I think I can see that. XD

Robert Phipps Jr (Perren d'Wolff)

My first thought was Hoposei from Ranma 1/2

I always try to remain true to the tropes. XD

rykott

Hah... I kinda had a feeling it would be a perverted old man someone ended up know. I was not disappointed ;D

Aaron Henley

Yeah Kari. Whoops

You mean Kari's grandfather? That's because I used the Master Roshi archetype. ;-) Every story needs at least one perverted old badass.

Aaron Henley

Why do I picture Lins grandfather wearing sunglasses and a turtle shell?


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