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WEIDERGEBURT Act III: Chapter 3

🕑 Added 2019-09-23 14:36:30 +0000 UTC

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I definitely meant windows...lol. Thanks for catching this. I'll correct it in my manuscript.

Synn Shadow

'The old man with the handlebar mustache and windows peak paused...' I do believe you meant widow's peak, not windows peak.

Tim Nielsen

oops guess it works either way....

Tim Nielsen

I used the time they picked themselves up to wipe the sweat from my face so it wouldn’t get in my eyes. I used the time "as" they picked themselves up to wipe the sweat from my face so it wouldn't get in my eyes. =_) sorry to be nit picky.

Starwarscout Jon

I'm so happy he gets the light element, I was truly worried. Be cause he could have fought off the 7th great overlord without it. As I understand it the more elements that are combined create a greater distortion to reality, so I wonder what would happen if Alex could use them all? I think he would become a god, but that's just my opinion.

rykott

The long weekend here slowed me down... but now it allows me to move straight on to a new chapter ;D


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