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WIEDERGEBURT Act II: Chapter 48

🕑 Added 2019-09-05 15:02:42 +0000 UTC

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Illiterate Scholar

Where you have "in a vein attempt", again it should be "vain," as in "vanity."

Which villains are under-developed exactly?

Looting Pillager

One of my least favorite tropes Villian of the week, or monster of the week with these two g-string assassins. If your villains are just fodder why have them? Seriously they do not even have a motivation. I feel bad for how under developed these two were.

rykott

Lin and Fay have their time to shine... then finish on an oops moment :P


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