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WIEDERGEBURT Act II: Chapter 47

🕑 Added 2019-09-02 16:34:43 +0000 UTC

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I hope this story has been keeping you occupied while you deal with insomnia. That's never fun. Feel free to point out any other inconsistencies you find.

Synn Shadow

I wasn't sure because I've been reading non-stop for about 10 hours now, mostly because of insomnia so I couldn't remember if I read it correctly. Just glad I could help.

You are correct. Thank you for pointing this out. It might be small, but it's still an inconsistency that I should fix. I'm also editing this volume right now, so it'll be easy to fix it before I send it off to my editor.

Synn Shadow

I'm not sure because I've recently been binge reading this, but I thought Eryk explored the sewers for two years in his past life. But he was worried whether Lin would fit? I could be reading too much into it, but I wanted to say something just in case.

Illiterate Scholar

In the very last sentence "in vein" should be "in vain."

Yes! Thank you. I tend to get that wrong.

It’s just a Rune Circle meant to keep the shadows that created from from dispersing. form from?

Thanks for catching this.

Aaron

She saw one of her shoulders go down, buried under soldiers*?

rykott

He's had more time to mature his stupidity ;D

I think Hagen is smarter than Leucht, but he's definitely a tool.

rykott

Good to see Hagen is as dumb as his son :P


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