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WIEDERGEBURT Act II: Chapter 45

🕑 Added 2019-08-27 15:26:50 +0000 UTC

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It gets pretty exciting later on. And thank you. :-)

Leonardo Bastos

Cant wait to see how this all plays out, cant believe it took me this long to start reading this here, it's a incredible Novel.

You are quit welcome

I also make some changes when readers catch them here on Patreon. I've been correcting these errors when you or someone else mentions them. Thank you for pointing this out.

"Kari and Lin, I need you two to head over to the Imperial [...] That is where Lin and I will be traveling." Again with Lin and Fay. I think Fay goes with Kari und Lin with Eryk but im just guessing. I realy hope your editor catches these kinds of mistakes befor it goes into print

Lol. I am afraid not. The action of coiling your tail and shooting forward takes too long for a tail version of Flash Step to be viable. But she doesn't really need it.

Devin

Can Lynn learn instead of flash step, spring step!? I’m sure if she coils that tail it could boost her speed!

rykott

Man... this dropped Friday afternoon my time and I totally missed it. Best thing is the next chapter is waiting for me to read now I am done with this one ;D

We're reaching the climax of Act II.

Story is getting damn good. I can't wait for the next chapter.


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