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WIEDERGEBURT Act II: Chapter 12

🕑 Added 2019-05-06 15:20:02 +0000 UTC

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my thoughts exactly :D

Someone else pointed this out too. I'm fixing it in the final manuscript, but it was something I honestly forgot about when I was writing.

I'm surprised that Lin didn't try to use the ability of the Ring of Marji to check up on Eryk after the initial shock of his sudden fall wore off. If she did, then she could have reassured everyone of his current situation. Also, if she were to use it, I think Eryk would feel it and have an idea where they are at.

I've got some plans for all this. I'm trying to make this plot twist more intense than usual. We'll see how it pans out with her.

Jericho Knight

So she's what's instrumental to his plans? Huh. Also, the fact she keeps mentioning hagen, eventually kari, fay or another will have to overhear and be like wait.... cuz eryk totally has no odea who he is.

rykott

You do them so well :D

Arthur V.

Oh those "two small tufts of hair" were ahoge? I thought they were kemonomimi.

Neither. Human.

I'm very good at naked introductions. They are, you could say, my specialty.

rykott

The plot thickens. As always you masterfully introduce a new character... by having them naked ;D

Arthur V.

Catgirl? Foxgirl? Other?

I couldn't say.

Is he adding another girl to his harem?


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