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WIEDERGEBURT Act II: Chapter 13

🕑 Added 2019-05-09 16:21:12 +0000 UTC

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Glad you're enjoying it. :-)

Leonardo Bastos

lmao man this is pure gold.

Good catch. Thank you.

Dennis Palsson

Thanks. Please set the over there, - them?

Thank you for catching all of these. I've gone back and corrected them in my original manuscripts. :-)

Aaron

“Does he… have sex with you two?” too*?

I second that especaly since the bad guys plant to use her to fake a demon beast attack and yes i did think of something along those lines befor reading the comment or ahead

JTP

Would have liked to see it at least mentioned by Lin when they were deciding if he was still alive or not.

Yes, Eryk kinda forgot he can use it to track Lin's location. To be fair, he hasn't really needed it, and I think the situation made it slip his mind.

Sharp instincts.

Dyr is totally some kind of experiment that has demon beast genes transmutated into her or something.

Was the ring of marji forgotten?

rykott

I'm fickle with my waifu's. But she wouldn't be replaced... just supplemented :D

Lol. I'm sure it will be easy to figure out once I reveal more.

New best girl?! Whatever happened to Fay?! Are you... replacing her?! I wonder how many people caught that bit of foreshadowing. You and one other person seemed to have noticed.

rykott

So... Dyr new best girl? Topless intro, worshipping the penis in the next chapter ;D So... the beast repellant had an effect... She seems to be going in an interesting direction :)

Arthur V.

So, Dyr is somehow susceptible to whatever aspect of the repellent that acts as a demon beast aphrodisiac? I can't wait to hear details

You and me both. I sometimes feel like I write so I can live vicariously through my characters. XD

Eyrk is in trouble now. But there are times I wished I had his trouble. I just hope the girls don't go to hard on him.


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