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WIEDERGEBURT Act II: Chapter 5

🕑 Added 2019-04-11 15:21:54 +0000 UTC

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Paul Sneddon

Starting to work my way though them myself, also even if it was just an emotion decision for Kari it also would end up being the better play since then it's a royal killing a noble instead of a peasant (admittedly one that won the tourney but still tech a peasant).

I think everyone knew he was gonna die, but I wanted to make how he died a surprise. ^^' You are getting through them pretty fast.

Mildly surprising with Grant’s death but I sort of sensed it coming. Great chapter though. Scenes like that always worry me even though I know the outcome will be good. Also sense I’m reading all of these at a very quick pace I’ll try to limit my comments so as not to blow up your notifications Mr. author.

Chris Turney

Screw being simply satisfying, that was freaking epic!

rykott

Twas most satisfying indeed :D

I thought having Kari kill Grant would be a nice surprise.

rykott

Haha... Grant died like a bitch... not even to the person he was afraid of. Perfect.

Well you pulled that one off, because I was not expecting that.

I wanted to have an interesting plot twist no one saw coming.

Ok that was a twist I did not expect. But I say that is a situation well taken care of..


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