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WIEDERGEBURT Chapter 44

🕑 Added 2019-03-18 14:59:13 +0000 UTC

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I was literaly waiting for some one to be launched into the wall

Bob

Lmao, that's Eryk getting serious. Just grab the sharp object and break it like he's bored.

rykott

Here's my vote for creepy yandere Catalyna ;D Great to read as well ;D

Thanks. Lol. I made Catalyna to be the kind of woman who is strong, but she likes men who are stronger than her. Eryk fits that bill pretty good. XD That was my favorite part to write. :-)

rykott

Nice chapter. Masochist Catalyna is kinda hawt ;D Torgny kept it running in the family of getting pwned by Eryk. So satisfying watching him get his ass handed to him even when doping up.

I am glad you have been liking this story so much. I do plan on having Eryk's memories of his past life effect the present. Right now he is trying to change the past, but doing so will inevitably cause the information he has from his past become inapplicable. As he works toward changing the past, the events that follow will affect the present, changing it from what he remembers. I can't say much, but I can say that every change he makes changes this timeline and takes it further away from his previous timeline.

I have to say I am really enjoying this story. I love the plot, I love the characters, and love the direction that the story is going. But I am wondering how the changes are going to affect his memories of the life he had before. Every little change that he makes in this time line, should ripple forward effecting so many other things. Will he remember what happened, or will that memory change?

Chris Turney

Use the one in my comment. It's the same, lol

I didn't try before fixing it.

Chris Turney

Try clicking it. Does it load any interesting web pages? Lol

Lol yeah im kinda oppisite ill get so into reading somtimes that i forget that im listening to music only for a bass to drop and scare the crap out of me

I feel like I should try this now... music while reading. I used to do that, but I kept singing and forgot to read. XD

And then brooks and dunn came on and it was back to a good read

Say amen by panic at the disco came on as i was reading this and turned it from a good read to a edge of seat read lol

Thank you for catching that. I fixed that small error.

Chris Turney

Nice! And Oh No It's impossible.At This time! How Do You Like That Reference I Made From This Chapter? Did You Notice It?


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