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WIEDERGEBURT Chapter 36

🕑 Added 2019-02-18 16:19:29 +0000 UTC

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First State is getting a Spiritual Aura. Second State is taking the Spiritual Aura into yourself to strengthen your body. Third State is transforming your body into your elemental affinity.

Arthur V.

So if the First State is an aura and the Third State is turning your body into spiritual power, what is the Second State?

rykott

Definitely should boost her confidence as well. She seemed to think she was going to struggle even once things hard started.

Thank you. Yeah, I wanted her to be the underdog for this. No one expects her to be any good, then BAM!, she unleashes a can of whoop ass.

rykott

Nice chapter. I like how everyone discounted Faye straight away but she ended up one shoting both her opponents. I bet they don't make that mistake again ;D

Thank you!

Chris Turney

Nice. You did well though. It was really good!

It was my first time doing a tournament like this, but it definitely wasn't my first multi-fight scene.

Chris Turney

Yup. Was it your first time writing a multi fight tournament scene like this? I'm sure I've seen a multi fight scene before by you, but in a tournament and in the same area?

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. It was a tough chapter since I had to write multiple fights at once.

Chris Turney

Nice Fight. I almost feel like I should use really bad engrish to say that, but I'm not sure how I'd say "nice" in that way.


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