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Eyes of Tomorrow Now Available for Download

🕑 Added 2021-04-13 12:47:24 +0000 UTC
Eyes of Tomorrow Now Available for Download

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Glynn Stewart

Hi Gerhard. You can feel free to flag continuity issues in the typo report form. We just ask that you avoid editorial suggestions and focus on technical errors. We really appreciate the eagle eyes of our advance readers to pick up those issues! -Robin

Gerhard Blab

What a fitting end to the story. Thank you! Though it is bitter sweet, and I for one would definitely hope for more stories from this exciting universe! As an aside: you have a link to report typos (which I probably won't be able to spot with my dyslexia), but do you also want feedback on textual issues? If so: Chapter 3 -- " ... Shotilok was literally a natural herd leader, with hormones that would make other Rekiki inclined to follow her." Do you mean pheromones? Chapter 65 -- " The chlorophyll equivalent on the Ren homeworld had _much_ to answer for." -- that would make Strike Master Koh-Stan a large pink plant. Interesting, though slightly disturbing image. If I am overstepping, please feel free to ignore. And thanks again for a great book!


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