Bottle Blondes 11: Four Hours and a Fortnight
🕑 Added 2025-06-05 22:14:47 +0000 UTCI've been itching to write this one for a while, and it turned out a lot trickier than I thought it'd be! Still, extremely fun to finally put to the page.
Formatting, continuity, and spelling revisions: 6/17/25
Comments
Jade Diaz
I binge read the whole story in two days and I love it so so soooooo much. And well, here I am. Feral for what comes next.
Rhiannon Swanson
oh good catch! (i am currently bapping myself on the forehead) i’ll fix that up this week
Margot Wasserman
idk if this is the place to do this, but i did notice what i think is an inconsistency in this chapter. In this chapter, it's implied that the night that David winds up in Anna & Lucys' room (where Viola is hiding under the bed) was 1 week before the frat party. However, I believe that it's supposed to be 2 weeks before the frat party, where the week in-between is where chapter 2 takes place.