Bottle Blondes 10: Presented for Your Inspection
🕑 Added 2025-05-21 01:02:07 +0000 UTCLonger one! I think I got the formatting to work on those texts better, but let me know!
Enjoy :)
Updated 6/17/25
Comments
Alyson Greaves
Good fucking chapter
Alyson Greaves
Yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah. Yeah! ...yeah.
Rhiannon Swanson
not on like a scene to scene basis! there are some little bits in all this tho the macro level is closer to the play than the micro
baked
evil evil evil i love it
Valerie Coburn
So I have no information about Twelfth Night that isn't in this story, but from the way Anabelle talks about stuff I gotta ask: Is Viola just living through the plot of Twelfth Night right now? (if so, this must be the funniest thing from David's perspective)
Ronni
This chapter was so great with so many great parts. I had dreams about it all night long.
Stephanie
AAAAAAAAAAAA ITS SO CUTE!!!
Amelia J
Oh my GOD that was perfect. (Except the part where Anna decided to enunciate a certain name a bunch. Hate that name.)
Antinoë
anabelle: do not get on boats viola: no problem! *dunks herself straight into the water*
Caroline Debenham
Evil cliffhanger! Typo first page - bus should be bush.
Klairi Tasopoulou
Oh dear! I guess it's time we get several answers about David, huh? I hope they'll be good ones. Somehow I can't imagine David not being nice but you never know… I also hope he won't have to take her to the hospital or something!
ellie
Incredible chapter. So much happened. So well paced and written. The cliffhanger kills me but I'll have to bear that pain. there's a typo somewhere that says "on's" instead of "one's"
Margot Wasserman
aaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Monica
Eeee this was *so* good 😊
Matt Comeau
You had me CONVINCED it was going to burn longer
Matt Comeau
AAAAAAAAAAAAA it's perfect. it's all perfect
Laura Lemon
"Enjoy :)" YEAH OKAY.
Laura Lemon
Oh I think I might ACTUALLY die with this
Rainplosion
I *did* fantasize about if the runner in the early morning could be david, and especially after Sarah mentioned he runs...
Rainplosion
Ohhhhhh my god ending the chapter here is so cruel