Bottle Blondes 9: Relax
🕑 Added 2025-05-07 22:07:37 +0000 UTCSo, trying a couple of different upload formats on this, and just about none of them look perfect, so bear with me! I'm especially struggling with the indentation on the texts in .epub files (I swear to god we're gonna get there). Anyway! Thank you all for the support! It means a lot!
Typos and formatting revisions: 6/17/25
Comments
Stephanie
that kiss is gonna hit like crack
ellie
Very pleasant read and great chapter. Turmoil, partial resolution, good epub formatting. Thank you!
Amelia J
If it makes you feel any better, you're not the first to be driven insane by sciveners (That's what I'm assuming you use, I think you mentioned it before) compile function. I've been tinkering with it for months and still can't get the .epub exports the way I want them. The text messages in the pdf look good here, at least!
Alyson Greaves
The epub indents look good, the only thing I’d so is define an additional paragraph class to use for text message conversations so you can elide the indents there. You ought to be able to do that inside Scrivener and have it carry the formatting across to the export. (Give me a DM if you need advice etc.)
Klairi Tasopoulou
I woke up in the middle of the night, looked at my phone, and saw there was an update on this. Then I went back to sleep and dreamt that I read it, and it was a really short chapter where Vi goes back to the other girls' room, says hi, and falls asleep. Glad it wasn't that. :p
Caroline Debenham
"I just need to keep my head down for a bit" (30 secs later) "Oh, hi David!"
Antinoë
it was a soft and gentle chapter, even though there was The Boymode (urgh) i hope viola finally gets her kiss at the party i hope we get to see viola explain to the girls that actually they need to go out for said boykissing to happen
July
Oh this girl is absolutely not showing up to that party as Seb. No fucking way.
Rhiannon Swanson
the man is everywhere who would be surprised honestly
Ronni
FWIW, I thought the text messaging looked fine in the epub version. And NGL, I swore that when Viola found that hidden spot in the bushes, I half expected Cam to stumble into them at any second! LoL
Rhiannon Swanson
:)
Laura Lemon
I am SCREAMING at David's last words this chapter.
Alyson Greaves
Oh hell yes. Gonna read this in the morning 🎉