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Comic Rewards 11-05-2024 (Part 2 of 2)

🕑 Added 2024-11-05 16:12:26 +0000 UTC

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Glenn Sellers

Okay. I wasn't sure. Thanks for clarifying.

Jay Naylor

Dude this is a whole comic. It's going into next year.

Glenn Sellers

Uh, is this page 2 of 2 or page 1 of 2? The dialog implies there's more to come.

Antonio Fernández Rosa

The truth is that I was looking forward to seeing Piper in action, although one question, is she lesbian or bi?

Jacob Moss

Been looking forward to this. Penelope is one my favourite characters along with lynne. What can I say, I like naturally hairy girls.

Basque

So this is where Piper showed up! She and Penelope are both looking great here! A major strength of your artwork is definitely how expressive you make characters. This page is an excellent example! You absolutely nailed Piper's looks especially. Great job making the middle scene feel intense, Piper's look really sells it! Plus the motion lines and panel breaking work well for adding intensity too. The bottom center panel is incredible too! Spectacular work with Piper's face there, superb expression and details like the sweat are a nice touch. It'd be great to see more like that from you! Another thing you did well here was the text, great use of different font sizes and bolding for emphasis. It works well for the "AH!"s and "Right there!" particularly. Penelope's Secret is off to a great start! Excited to see where it goes from here!

thezenfrog

Get the feeling the next page is gonna be about Genny and her having trysts from time to time and it's got her thinkin' she might actually be bi, maybe

Robert

I am excited for this comic in December.

Robert

Ultimate bed and breakfast

YurY

Hot girls

DeltaWolf

yeah you can tell she's getting kind of tired with eating box and the intrusive thoughts about penises are starting to plant in.

DeltaWolf

Hah I was right about Piper!

Silvador

MOUSE COMIC! MOUSE COMIC! FUCK YEAH!!! <3<3<3

Legends

YESSSSSSS, WOOHOO!

Luis

Penelope damn

glitch

Don't often see a mouse eating a cat

GepettoVonStock

I love it already. The facial expression of her and the knowledge of what's to come. Great work really. :)

pokediginut

This is gonna be fun

Doomslayer69

Hooray the first page, with a fun beginning

Reptiles of Lustria

Top Notch work as always Jay, thank you for this! Penelope is super cute and I love seeing her in this work of yours! Appreciate the great art, smut or not, your talent and happy to be here!