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Brooke Goes To College part 5 page 2

🕑 Added 2024-09-19 22:45:45 +0000 UTC

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Texas Gent

There’s nothing quite like getting absolutely hammered by a silhouette

Fanjangil

I like the cut of his gib 😼

Far Bjorne

Aaaaaaaaaaand I just heard the beginning of the theme song 🤣

Sneaky V

Bro is a whole shadow

Rigel

Kinda reminded of The Stig.

Raven Wolf

Calling that man Darkrai. Dude is a shadow that knocks you out like a light 🫡

Viro Veteruscy

Good guy Scratch~

Ye big lad

Let’s go!!!

Antarctican

The surfacing of Scratch the biker. I like it.

Basque

Great to see this chapter kicking off with a bang! Also, good job handling the change between pages. The thin house shot first works like an establishing shot in a movie, and it being small means it doesn't take up space from the rest of the page. And showing Brooke still sweating at first is a nice detail to convey how this page continues from the last one. Things like this really show off your talent for comics and experience with them since these kind of little things people might not even think of but really make it flow much more smoothly. And great work with Polly and Scratch! Her drooling look and all the hearts are nice details to show how much she's enjoying it. Nice work with the scratch marks too, they're varied enough to look natural. And really interesting work with Scratch's fur and tail, his fur flying everywhere and tail breaking the panel border make him look even more wild. Also Maya's commentary is hilariously great! The final shot is an interesting one too. Scratch having more cat-like eyes makes him look more wild as well. Plus the helmet has very neat furgonomics for the ears! That's a fun little touch; it's always great to see details like that in furry settings! Thanks again for sharing your work Jay! Looking forward to seeing where this goes from here!

A Patreon of the Ahts

Ha ha Mr N... I caught a sudden vision of Jay Naylor walking into a room wearing sunglasses and a T-shirt with a large N on it. Camera cuts to a tied up Adam West Batman "Mr. N! I might have known, you dastardly fiend!" Tied up Burt Ward Robin "Holy Consonants, Batman!"

JasonAW3

Cat caught the mousie...

Doomslayer69

Yeah, my first guess was astronaut but thought that too out there for this nice series

Far Bjorne

All I keep thinking is a line from a Digital Underground song “You're taxin' it and waxin' it and workin' it around 'Til the booty starts makin' that clappin' sound” Love it as usual Mr. N 😁