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Comic Rewards 06-05-2024

🕑 Added 2024-06-05 14:16:44 +0000 UTC

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forsakengraves

yaaaay seeing knotty stuff again... enjoying all the world building presented here, and mistress theresa is beautiful as always. also, really enjoy seeing the hybrid offspring and how the features mix in different oscillations

Texas Gent

Eeeeek! So excited to see more on the cottonwine equine civilization, I’ve been looking forward to it for years

GiGuy524

Found it, thank you

Jay Naylor

Should be fixed now. Thank you.

SithYautja

To add to this, on page 10, when describing the children, it says "Hybrids tend retain". I feel like the word "to" is missing. Love your work! Cottonwine is my favorite universe!

TY 2022

Loving this comic. If I lived in this world I'd spend most of my free time with Sarjhin females. See how many little ones we could have.

Jay Naylor

The zip is attached to the entry if that's what you mean.

GiGuy524

Need the link for the download.

byan marthy

You got the Cats and Wolf's done (very nocely). All that is left is the Equines, Orcs, and rabbits. And I guess otters if that old comic is still canon

Caffina

Oh man am I excited for the next set of pages.

Basque

Excellent job with this part Jay! Impressed with all the different poses and perspectives on the first new page. It really shows off that you can do a variety of shots well! Also great details here too. Of course you draw top tier butts! The heart butt on the middle right especially turned out well. Nice work with the knots and veins too. The pussy stretched to an O shape in the bottom right is a great effect! And the text with these continues to be great narration. It's especially neat the implications you're able to weave in with formal text, like "substantial size which some women love" and the only advice for not getting knotted is being in control. It's fun and funny to see what sexual details you can put in such formal and flowery language! I wonder how many incidents here have been of a wife suck on a knot when her husband comes home... On the next page, wonderful work with the sexy Wolven ladies. Particularly with the fur detail, the way you made their fur look rougher than your more modern characters and did big pubic fur tufts makes them feel more wild. Also, bodies breaking the panel borders is a nice touch for the layout too. And the tongue out is very cute! A nice detail in the text here is more detail about the tribes and how they vary over such large territory, including how their relationships with humans vary too. That makes the world feel like a much more complex place! You continue to do beautiful pregnant bellies too! Nice job with making the tattoos follow the curves of the Wolvens' bellies and butts. And interesting to get more personal detail about Mistress Theressa too! So far everything has been very formal and general, so hearing her say Wolven are her favorite lovers and talk about her Wolven kids was an unexpected twist! Speaking of Wolven kids, the last panel is adorable! Excellent work with the hybrid features, it's interesting and impressive that you're making hybrids different than just all variations of catgirls. I bet there are a lot of blue eyed Wolvens out there! Neat to see the map and the information about Cottonwine too. Again seeing the variety of Wolven tribes and how widespread they are makes the setting more realistic. And Cottonwine is the most magic-like aspect of the setting so far. The dichotomy of the effects is certainly interesting. We've seen the docility effects with Pablo, it'd be interesting to see he opposite increased potency effect with a Wolven stud sometime! Lastly, the Equian page is a good introduction for them! It's great that you're able to give each different race a different tone and feel. The fertility idol is hilariously great imagery! Also, the page is another great example of how well you're presenting sexual details in formal language. Lines like the "emissions are very large" and "be prepared" parts are great! Also the mention of contraceptive potions is an excellent way to introduce more low-level magic concepts to the setting, and saying they need to be taken for a week was a great way to emphasize Equian potency! Glad to see this turning out so well! Best of luck with all your projects!

Jacob Moss

Cotton wire folks we are eating good this month.

Cyrus loken

Very nice. Loving the attention given to the human male side of things!

Qwert49

I liked to see the Wolvens, its females, and its offsprings. I appreciate little information of them. I am excited to see the Equians and the Lapines.

glitch

I hope we see actual pony equids. Lil Sebastian would be the most sought after fertility priest

Skyler Stolz

This is utterly fantastic and well done. I love the Wolven so far! And the hybrids are adorable!

Doomslayer69

Man this is really good stuff, can't wait to see what the equine folk are like

Antarctican

More great lore topped off with an Equian Teaser at the end. I look forward to next months installment.

Jay Naylor

Thanks. Should be fixed now.

GepettoVonStock

Horses come next, looking forward to seeing some huge dick. There's a little mistake on page 9 like Skunkupine said. :)

IamUnknown

Oooh, can't wait for more pretty ponies!

Skunkupine

I noticed an error on page 9 of Mistress Theressa part 2 - "Human semen is thicker than sticker than [....]" - I think you meant "thicker and sticker than".

Reptiles of Lustria

This is utterly fantastic Jay. An exquisite almost scientific approach that is exceptionally well drawn and beautifully colorful. Your sense of motion and excellent use of the furry body is par excellence. Bravo. I am happy to be a subscriber.