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Brooke Goes To College, part 4, page 34

🕑 Added 2024-04-28 23:40:24 +0000 UTC

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forsakengraves

man, i know he probably was just really worked up so i wont hold it against him but it really does suck when someone makes a fool out of themself like that -w- eager to see how he improves, or doesnt, in the future

Jay Naylor

Maybe. Can't say.

Basque

Oooooo, Bruce is in trouble! Feels like a soap opera drama! Great job with the page overall! You always make great use of different angles and perspectives for your panels. Excellent work capturing different feelings using close-ups and zoom-outs and other such things. Likewise, good use of bold in the dialog to show emphasis. Plus it's always fun to see rear views in your work since you draw top tier butts! On a related note, damn that "swarmed" panel is incredible! It's rare to see you do sizeplay but when you do you really knock it out of the park! I think it's because you're so good at making your characters feel realistic and giving them a real sense of weight and mass, when you do big sizes it really makes them feel impactful instead of just looking inflated. Details like the veins and fur effects turned out well. Great work with the girls too, particularly how far under his tail the rightmost one is and with touches like the hearts too. Finally the wisp of musk is a superb detail! You're one of the best artists online for including details from all different senses in your work! I do hope we get to see more like this from you, and perhaps more action with Bruce someday!

Ragnarok

Don’t apologize man, I hope you don’t think my comments are a critique in any way. I love everything about this and just want more. You make a great point.

Louis Richard Morrell

Will we ever see Kaori again in the future? Like in a different comics?

Jay Naylor

Brooke didn't shut down his ability to grow. He did when he responded poorly to her rejecting him. She wants something different than him. This entire thing is about chasing fetishes versus real relationships. I'm sorry.

Kara

And he proves Brooke’s point from the last one…he really does not get it and he needs to grow up.

Ye big lad

Dam, should of kept his mouth shut and hands to his side, he dug his own grave

Silvador

Something something blackjack and hookers. XD

Ragnarok

Hmm, that’s hard to describe. Really the only payoff I’m looking for is good character development. This issue was basically 30 pages of Bruce unsuccessfully chasing Brooke and nobody has really developed much this issue. The last page we were on the cusp of Bruce being given the opportunity to change/grow, but Brooke shut that down pretty hard. I guess I’m hoping for that to be worth never experiencing the life/mentality altering dick Bruce was sure to provide her. 😅

Jay Naylor

I'm not sure what kind of payoff you're expecting. This is her story. There's going to be a part 5.

Ragnarok

Yeah that’s why it’s my favorite among everything you’ve made actually, I am just now completely lost as to what the big payoff for all this is going to be. For example if Brooke just ends up with the relationship she wants with someone single or new it’s kind of a let down because she won’t grow and doesn’t really deserve that after her antics the last couple of issues. At this point Kaori showing back up and through dramatic conquest taking everyone back to reclaim her throne and forcing Brooke to submit or leave almost sounds more appealing. Tbh I wish this rated higher in popularity so we could get more pages each month or dare I dream of coloring lol.

Jay Naylor

Yeah this comic is about character. It's not going to be the greatest if all you want to see is everyone having sex with everyone.

Viro Veteruscy

Damn...

zeel

Wow, went directly from pathetic to ass. Glad she stood her ground.

Naftar

Ahaha excellent move by Brook! Sorry for Maya but it’s better this way for her.

Salicia Balle-noir

It sucks cause this dude won’t learn his lesson as everyone encourages it

Ragnarok

Man, this page is hard to process. Not that the art or story is bad in any way… its just that this could have gone sooo many different ways and it’s really sad to see dozens of fun possibilities I had in mind vanish in a few speech bubbles. Hopefully we get to see Bruce actually plunder some booty in the booty oriented comic one day, but I wouldn’t be surprised if he doesn’t show back up for a long time. Maybe we get a consolation Prof. Anders scene. :/

MidastheStallion

True...but but he said he gets swarmed by women....and he does pull chicks. He's definitely not gonna find what he wants with that attitude, but you can't deny he's crushing it from a physical perspective.

MidastheStallion

Well....he does pull, I'll give him that. Whatever he loses, I'm sure he'll replace soon enough. If what he's looking for is a healthy relationship (whatever that looks like for him) tho, he's gonna need to get into a better head space. What he needs is a break and some self evaluation.

Antarctican

Schadenfreude.

Jacob Moss

What’s that German word? Schartefraud? Enjoying someone else’s misfortune it means. I think we are indulging in a little bit of that right now watching him get his comeuppance.