Eve St. Albert
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Amber Unveiled - a little background
🕑 Added 2025-09-15 06:29:55 +0000 UTCI thought I'd talk a little bit about Amber, and what I want to do with her.
I don't want to do another Kayley and Sam. I think if I do a long story, or any kind of multi-part story, I want to do something different each time.
I like stories about women discovering themselves. That's Blue Movie and Cuffed for sure. In some ways, it's Catfish, although in that one, Kate traps herself in a doomed relationship and a doomed alter ego. Even one offs have that going - Lizabet is the story of a young African woman desperate to escape repression and claim her sexuality. Even Eve's Cage is a story of love and discovery.
Kayley and Sam, so far is my odyssey. It's love struggling with corruption. And as has been pointed out, they're changing.
So what do I want to do with Amber. Something lighter.
So here goes: Amber's husband is Steve, they have a healthy marriage, they love each other. He's not a cuck. He's just allowing Amber to explore and have adventures. If you love something set it free, and if it loves you, it will return. That's Steve. He trusts her to return.
David - he has imagination, a meticulous kinky quality, and a nice but not perfect dick. He's a little controlling, a little insecure, he's not as good at sex as he wants to be, he's not as smart as he thinks he is. He'd like to think he's the bull in a Cuckold threesome - he's not. Steve isn't threatened, and Amber will kick his ass if he gets out of line. But what he is, is he's creative and detail oriented, and he played online with Amber, spinning wonderfully elaborate scenarios.
Well, they're experimenting with live action role play. Kinky live action role play. Like Kayley and Sam, they're doing role play. This time, it's real role play, as compared to Leroy's using it as a trojan horse to deconstruct the couple.
David is a little bit (a lot) of a nerd, and he's in charge of setting up these elaborate scenes and scenarios and making them work. Which also means making them feel real enough that Amber loses herself in them. But also carefully managing them so that she's never jarred out of them, that her suspension of belief doesn't snap because something hurts too much, or is too dirty in the wrong way, and so on. He's good at that.
Amber loves it. David loves it, because he gets to tap a stunningly beautiful, stunningly hot chick. Otherwise, he probably doesn't get laid a lot.
They do a scene, they fuck, David gets laid, Amber has an adventure. Then she goes home to Steve, tells him all about it, and they have their own.
David just has to keep coming up with role play scenarios to keep Amber's motor running. As much as they play Dom/sub, it's all about entertaining Amber. The minute she's bored, David fears, it's over. Amber plays sub, but she's not, not even a little bit. No pulling rank here.
This is the thing for David. He's getting laid with this incredible hottie. But only as long as he keeps coming up with scenarios to get her going. No pressure!
And of course, these experiences open Amber to getting laid - to a Chinese convenience store owner, to a Bar owner, probably others. And maybe through David, multi partners.
There's no darkness, no corruption. David isn't Leroy, or Lester, or Jake etc. This is just going to be fun.
And wicked kinky sex. Suggestions welcome.
Right now, there are two Amber stories, published in Perversions and Infidelities Trois, that I'll run here. Approx 10k words, each posting, so four chapters. One's already down.
While I want it to be superficial, I might deepen the characters. Explore David's insecurity and neediness, his loneliness, Amber's compassion and adventurousness, Steve's confidence and acceptance.
I think it will be open ended, it's just a matter of David coming up with things to do to Amber that will spark her. Hopefully, it will never involve her in the woods dressed in robes and pointy ears, and David dressing up as an Orc.
Mainly, this is about characters that trust each other, are sometimes annoyed or pulled into emotions regarding each other, that have kinky fun.
I'll save the angst for Kayley and Sam. It's going to get really dark for them soon.
Comments
Larry Hunt
also check your email when you get a chance.
Larry Hunt
I sent you a few suggestions - but in case you use any of it...didn't want to spoil for others.
Eve St. Albert
thank you!
Craig
I love all the layers you give to your characters
Eve St. Albert
Interesting. I'll think about that.
Eve St. Albert
I could.
Dylan Robb
Would you ever do a cuckquean themed story?
A Philosophical Doctor
Thank you for elaborating on Amber and Steve. To begin with, they sound almost like Kayley and Sam – but I understand the subtle differences you are making in the balance of the relationship between Amber and David (and Steve) as opposed to the increasingly toxic relationship between Kayley and Leroy (and Sam). I look forward to reading more about this trio (beyond P&I) and discovering just how ‘inventive’ David can get. Incidentally, I don’t know if you are still interested in ‘scenarios’ that could be patched into Kayley and Sam (or other stories), but the shaving scene from Amber has reminded me of something from my own experience that you might be interested in; let me know. However, it still feels as though Kayley and Sam is your magnum opus, because it draws together many threads from your other stories: to use your own analogy – K&S feels like the quilt on the bed of your ‘master bedroom’ which is gradually growing to incorporate a patchwork of scenarios (and the traits of characters) from several of your other stories: perhaps those of Amber (as we are discussing here), Eve’s Cage (previously mentioned) and Blue Movie; we wait to see. You have already warned us that the next cuckolding is going to be hard on Sam (perhaps that will be your revenge on some transgressive member of the male population?) – so maybe it will balance-out anything harsh you are planning for Kayley. As I have commented before (perhaps on Lit), one of the things that intrigues me about the writing of female authors is the way that they treat their ‘heroines’ – often more harshly than some male authors. I sometimes wonder whether such writing is motivated by personal experience, and/or by a need to exorcise personal daemons, or a desire for some form of vicarious wish fulfilment – or if it is simply derived from a very creative imagination. For this reason, I am pleased when female authors reflect on their own writing. (I have previously mentioned another Lit author whose writing I think is very erotic – Emily Miller – who has commented extensively on why she writes what she writes). APD
