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Chapter Comment, Kayley and Sam, c. 25
🕑 Added 2025-08-16 02:52:13 +0000 UTC
Okay, this is a comment I made in discussions of Chapter 25. I thought it was intelligent enough to be worth posting.
With Chapter 25, a three parter before the cucking, here's what I want to establish: Kayley and Sam are adventurous.
Before Leroy, they were becoming adventurous, and had started a game of Kayley or even Sam flirting but not doing anything. But they were getting closer and closer to crossing boundaries. In fact, Sam tells Kayley to take her panties off and go back to see the man who had propositioned. Their game was already ready to escalate.
Leroy opened that door, and the first thing after opening the door was Derek. Then Leroy swooped in and made it all about him.
But Kayley and Sam are a couple, they're adventurous and happy together. They love each other to pieces, and they trust each other. I've shown a lot of scenes where they bond and have fun sexually.
Chapter three where Kayley is laying in the car and showing her pussy and giving Sam a foot job. There's the scene where Sam puts a ball gag in her mouth and fucks her every which way.
This current three part scene is all about their relationship, where Kayley is going, and Sam's character, how he thinks, what he does, how he works.
The earlier scene with Blaze shows Sam's character: Did you notice, through the whole thing with Blaze, and even after, Sam constantly insists on seeing her as a human being, relating to her as a person, even when he fucks her, he's treating her as a human person. Leroy has to work constantly and relentlessly to try to make Sam see her as just a cunt.
That's how Leroy sees the world - Everyone else is just a cunt to fuck. He conceals it, because that makes them easier to fuck. But that's his view.
Sam sees people. In the park, before he gropes Kayley, he teases out the life story of some random street musician. He gropes Kayley at the park, in the street, in the bar, but he picks his moment. As wild or adventurous as he is, every minute he's picking his moment, every minute, he's making sure he's taking care of her.
She feels safe because she is, and its liberating. Think back to their ball gag scene, as much as he put her through, all the things he did, all the borderline torture, he was watching her every minute, he was being careful, and he was taking care of her. He wasn't being a control freak, he was just taking care of her while running an improvised scene, always making sure of her. That's Sam.
See, look at it this way: Leroy is a Four Eff guy. Sam could never be a Four Eff guy. Rather, he's the guy that goes "Hey, I just snagged the keys to the candy store, let's go in and have fun!" He doesn't take, he invites. He's not about control, he's about opening the door.
Sam isn't weak, he isn't stupid. His vulnerability is that he's nice. He's a fucking Canadian. He let Leroy mess around in the bathroom, he let Leroy take the lead in the threesome because he's nice, it seemed like Leroy wanted it a lot, so Sam let him. Leroy's leveraging that niceness into domination and cuckolding, and Sam is letting him for a number of reasons - Leroy's pretending to be a friend, Leroy wants this, Leroy is trying to convince him he wants this, that it's in him, and Kayley seems to want and need it. He's not entirely happy, he's conflicted, he's being put in a position to lie to Kayley. And he doesn't quite understand what's going on, because Leroy is a master gaslighter. So its working.
As much as Leroy wants to break Kayley, he wants to break Sam. He wants to break the love between them.
But for the story to work, I need to show you Sam. And I need you to believe in Sam. To see not just a loser, or a weakling or a fool, but someone with a perspective, talent, ability.
Sam's the hardest one, the narrative is mostly Kayley, she's the star.
Leroy's the villain.
Sam is kind of caught on the edge. So, as we're coming up to the Second Cuckolding Session, which is going to be incredibly destructive and damaging for Sam... I felt the need to showcase him with an adventure with Kayley. We see that he's got a plan for the day, in how he insists she dress, in taking her to the park, the street, the bar... In how he handles her. He doesn't tell her what he's going to do, but she trusts him. He knows what he's doing. He's flexible and fluid, willing to let events happen. In the glory hole session, when Leroy sees Kayley go into her cock trance, he's astonished and he really doesn't know what to make of it. Sam just takes things in stride.
He didn't bring her to the bar to get her felt up by strangers, but he brought her knowing the possibility was available to her, and gave her permission and encouragement - he gave her the safety to do it if she wanted.
He didn't insist she fuck Bruno, but if something like that came up and she wanted, he made sure there was a condom - both license and permission.
And frankly, he's not really bothered and wouldn't feel cuckolded that Bruno got his cock in her for ten seconds and ejaculated. For him, it's just another part of the whole scene, Bruno and even Bruno's ejaculation in her, is just all part of building up to his main event, just foreplay. He's not threatened by a guy who comes in ten seconds.
He'd be curious about what's going through her head that she'd want him to ejaculate in her after her own orgasm when she no longer needed him.
But he wouldn't be Judgmental. Kayley doesn't explain it, because she's not fully understanding herself.
I've got a storm coming up, a big dark Storm - The Second Cuckolding Session. I have an insidious, gaslighting nemesis pretending to be their friend and guide, but with Dark Plans.
Before that Storm, I felt a really had to show a summer's day, a picnic. I had to show Sam being his best Sam. Kayley loving him, but showing traces of corruption. I had to show the couple in love and in light having an adventure on their own, outside of Leroy's control.
So that's what I'm doing. I'm doing what feels natural and authentic and necessary for the stories and characters. My decision. You have two more chapters of this, and I hope that when it's finished you'll see what I was trying to do, understand why I felt it was needed, and enjoy it. Because after that? Buckle your seat belts, hold onto your hats, put away all open drinks and belongings, because if you thought the first cuckolding was brutal... this is going to be rocket powered!
Comments
DOylyCarte
You are worrying about whether we see Kayley's and Sam's love and devotion? Don't. It shines through all your storytelling. Excellent job!
Craig
Obviously, Kayley is flirting with Sam when she calls him "evil" several times. But the most she can say about Leroy is that he is an "asshole", "mean", "jerk" or "insecure." I enjoy the irony.
Larry Hunt
I concur!
Larry Hunt
I'm not sure how cucking life works, but have to assume that it's not all sex. With that said, I kind of disagree on the cuckold statement - The story is riddled with bits since Leroy found out Sam had been listening on the phone - that's what made him change gears to push them Imo. Wouldn't it also include the husband not being able to touch his wife...it's why Leroy hated it when Kayley sneaked back to Sam. Would it include her denying Sam even a sensual kiss? I'm no expert on the subject of cuckolds or the life style...just seems it doesn't always involve the husband stuck in a corner while the wife is being fucked by another man.
Craig
I am happy to see these chapters that highlight Sam where we see his fun and adventurous side, where it’s believable that a livewire like Kayley would fall for him, trust him and follow him. Yes, you gave us heavy doses of that before, but set against his passivity and self-degradation in Leroy’s presence, it’s easy to lose sight of his upside. The domination scenes are so powerfully written, and compelling, that they trample everything else, at least for me. Like you say, Sam is nice. But down here in the States, “nice” is a put down. Your sense of pacing works for me. We see just enough of the monster to know he’s there, but we still don’t have the complete picture of him. That’s part of the narrative drive that keeps me reading. I imagine someone clicking on this story looking for a pure cuckolding tale is going to be disappointed because out of 25 chapters, only four are directly cuckold. If I had to categorize the rest, I’d say hotwife, voyeur, and rough. I am interested in your process. Did you start with the three main characters and just start writing? Did you outline it? I find outlining takes all the fun out of writing. I want my characters to take me somewhere, not the other way around. But in a story this long, I think it’s hard to keep the story intact. Especially a story delivered piecemeal like this. If you think of a better way to say something in Chapter 11 or 14, you can’t go back and change it. That’s frustrating. Almost as frustrating as waiting another four weeks or more for the cuckolding. And how many chapters is that going to run?
James
I love the back stories. This is part of why I have no issue with being a paying member. It’s a different type of connection to the story through you. That said, I also feel bad that you have to tell them. This is your literary creation and it’s quite spectacular, as are all your works I’ve read so far. If people don’t get it or don’t like it, then maybe they should just move on, just saying. I can’t wait for the next instalments!
Craig
Scary
Larry Hunt
Great breakdown. I've always felt bad for Sam, but have known he's the 'strongest link' in this entire journey they're on. He has to be...it's what a protector like him does. I'm glad to see this deep explanation, what he feels, how he loves, and how he cares. Sort of a behind the scene look into the husband's character, which has never been done in any cuckold story I've read...at least to this extent. (Thank You) Even based on the next session, how it will deeply effect Sam - I think he does it because it's pleasing Kayley. He'll do it, and then some, all because of that unbreakable love he knows is between them. Whatever he's put through...no matter how devastating it is at the time....he'll hold on to one thing. He'll hold on to and maintain his faith in Kayley. Having that alone, will see him through...no matter what's happening. He'll draw his strength from having that. Prisoner's of war will tell you the exact same thing...they survived hell because they had faith. Sam's faith in her is just that strong....it'll bend, I'm sure he'll doubt it sometimes, but it wont break. At least that's my opinion. Any who - I'm looking forward to learning more about Sam. I think I'll have to remind myself just how strong he is during and after the next session.
