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EVE'S CAGE

🕑 Added 2025-07-05 18:07:49 +0000 UTC

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Sturgeon

This is a wonderful story Miss Eve. I love the gradual manipulation of Chris into wanting and accepting the cage and I enjoyed Eve’s love for Chris giving them a mini victory over Allan at the end. I have a fondness for chastity, but believe it should be consensual between two people who love each affirmed by daily unlocking and renewed commitment. There’s something beautiful about foregoing your own pleasure so you can focus more intently on the pleasure of someone you love. 

 The evil presence of Allan in your story is terrifying, he clearly has no regard for their wellbeing at all. Even with the ray of hope you give us at the end I still fear for their future. It does leave me to wonder if a relationship between two people who love each other and a ‘dominant bull’ can ever truly work? It’s seems to me that it would be to easy for the third party to find himself either as a victim or as a harmer.

Allen R

"... a little crack in her soul that ran down all the way to the core." I love the imagery you come up with.

James

Wow Eve is on a tear, not one, or two but three stories. I’m so happy. So many things to unpack in this story. I do also appreciate the perspective notes you add as it helps add context, although admittedly I prefer reading your and others comments after I’ve read the story….which then often leads to rereading it. That whole concept of Allan being ok with her other life, of him secretly considering and being excited about the cage. The willingness to try it and to even ask for it, that whole psychological mind fuck, so intense, exciting and scary at the same time. I can only say your use of story and exploration of so many components of sexuality is fantastic.

Vinny

I liked the story - I think it stands on its own without sequels. In fact it would have been better ending it right where she slapped on the cage and called Chris to let him know the deed was done. Then leave it to the reader to try and figure out what happens; does Allan actually like it and embrace his new role or does he rebel and take some measure of revenge. I would have also preferred for Chris to remain an enigma, a disembodied voice on the phone. But I loved the psychological deception and betrayal aspect to it. That scene where she ties him down and he willingly submits - but then starts having doubts was really well done. But then the reconciliation at the end was a bit of a let down. Them going about their daily lives with him having been unwillingly put in a cage was a bit of a stretch. I mean love does have its limits before self preservation takes over, especially for a man. I mean the fact that it was “unbreakable”, “permanent” and engineered in Switzerland is pretty heavy duty. I don’t care if he was a cuck - anyone putting something like that on a persons body without there being like 100% consent is gonna have to deal with some serious consequences. But please don’t take these minor criticisms to heart over a great story; the tension over the “box” being like a coiled snake and the doubt as to her true alliance made the story feel like an erotic psychological thriller as opposed being just another cuck story. Giving it a seven out of 10.


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