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Chapter 263: Twice the Cure, Twice the Twinoge

🕑 Added 2025-11-17 06:50:14 +0000 UTC

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inchworm17

but decided it was probably better that Dave[ eat] ate as many as he could first.

rcm024

"Chip leaped from the bed on the Gorpila’s shoulder as she followed Rabyn into the room." -bed onto Gorpila's "That was why he made sure to charge back up her core as best he could." -charge her core back up

The Grey One

"In doing so [the] all of the soul..." "After gathering what they needed [up] Rabyn led..." - I recommend either removing the 'up' or moving it ("After gathering up...") and adding a comma where the up is now. ("what they needed, Rabyn...") "...if anyone knows who has[,] it will be him." - I suggest adding an extra comma here too

Ty

TFTC!


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