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Embracing Ellie: Chapter 19

🕑 Added 2025-08-26 23:00:08 +0000 UTC

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KT Morrison

Yeah that should say Move not Moved. And he was holding his nose like he was hiding it, making his voice sound nasal.

KT Morrison

6 or more.

JamesIsAsleep

Reading comprehension is a problem of mine but when Elie said "moved your hand" was the reader meant to think Hemi was covering himself up with his hands? I liked that moment as innocent banter that could have mischievous undertones but on the face of it is just what she should do in the moment, but it was so nonchalant (if I'm correct), maybe I'm wrong about how to read that from her.

47

Exciting. Your writing talent is superb. How many chapters left?

JamesIsAsleep

This kind of exchange is peak KT in my book. The effort Danny has undergone is exactly what we all need (the characters too) to make Hemi and Elie hooking up make sense. I love the visual of Elie playfully/antagonistically peeking her eyes over the water to say the cliffhanger line.


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