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200 Old Tricks Scaled to New Heights

🕑 Added 2024-08-03 00:00:01 +0000 UTC

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Storyhunter

Agreed

Storyhunter

Note the poem is definitely a rough draft. If you wanted I could polish it up. But as a comment and to communicate how I see the situation unfolding. It felt sufficient. Would likely rewrite the first section. Add in bits about who came to his aid in the battle and who is coming to his aid in the campaign to save the city. .... A second song would be about the next large battle. But a proper bard would likely be around then to create a proper ballad or a historian to write a chronicle. All ideas for use are up to you.

Storyhunter

A call to arms. ( Poem about the incident so far) Many saw him walking there, When the darkened veil fell, The hoards of deathless fodder, Driven by the whispered call, While the city fled, streaming back, The guardian strode towards death, Hells own legion staring him back, Before the gate he stopped the dead. The charge breaking at his lone stand. Look to the wonderer, see the flower keeper. Will you not fight with him and stand. Against the dead, fight here and deliver. To the legion the death they seek. The behemoths brought to ash. Vampire whispers make them reek. Of fear as they turn to ash at last. Send out the call to those who will fight. Those who willing to stand with the light. Calling magic, martial and manaless might. For the rage, the rage against the dying of our light. If the immovable want the poem feel free to use however you wish. Also writing a song isn't what's needed for the impression of one. A lyric. Or a couple of lines about the content and feel of a song+ a bit about a possible related genre could bring out the sense. The manaless can't give Terry much. The can improve his reputation+ make him a legend though. Songs, poems and tall tails are all things normal people use for courage and to call others to action. This seems to me like a point where songs / other art would be popping up un asked for.

BeauZoe

I'm 30 and this is deep.

Storyhunter

I know this might not be in your wheel house but. After this attack and our immovable mage Terry's defense of the town. + So many non combatants coming around. ...... The stories are going to start becoming a little wild. But Also ministerial and bard types are going to become interested in this incident. A good song can help raise the spirits of the living + be a rememberance for the dead defenders. While a full written song is likely unneeded. Twisting a version of an existing our world song with lyrics from this this setting could be an interesting exercise.

Aurora1325

yes

ImmovableMage

The mix-up was that RR's chapter 192 had the content of chapter 200 at first, i.e. it was supposed to be 192. The patreon is always 4 chapters ahead of RR, i.e. patron was at 196 when the mix-up happened. Today, the patreon regularly reached chapter 200. I'm currently writing the first draft of arc 8 but I generally have one arc/book scheduled as buffer while writing, so that I can edit the whole arc start-to-end once before the first chapter is released to readers.

Galenorla

I joined the patron today as it said there were four extra chapters to read, but I only see three. This chapter was one that was released early by accident a few weeks back. Have more chapters not been written since then?

roxurio10003

I need for him to get his moment to rest and heal with his family

Sesharan

Who puts more expectations on Terry— the people around him, or Terry himself?

themainmememan

The Immovable Mage -> The Immovable Guardian :D

Aurora1325

honestly the guardian is such a good name for terry


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