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208 Out for the Count

🕑 Added 2024-09-28 00:00:05 +0000 UTC

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ImmovableMage

Thanks for mentioning the post number, because I apparently forgot to add chapter 201 and 202 to the Arc 7 collection. There are always 30 chapters per arc, so Arc 7 will end with chapter 210 (2 more to go).

Sesharan

Poor Daisy. She really loved the idea of love, and she just doesn’t live in a situation where that can be her reality. I don’t blame her for wanting to live in a fantasy, especially when everything around her is going so dramatically wrong, but she definitely crossed the line by letting it affect other people’s reality.

Storyhunter

Well Daisy doing the save him from himself by making a deal does make sense... I would really like a pov of her perspective and how her mind set changed to allow for her to deal with vampires to help him flee. It's clear that while the near brush with death by the lightning strike and count was the straw that broke the cammels back. ..... The feeling of something being missing here is prevalent. A bit jarring seems like the best description. The Daisy we see here doesn't feel like the actual Daisy. Yes, she has some delusions but.... She also respected his boundaries. This specifically doesn't and feels like a giant leap for the character. Not a completely unforeseen one but..... Still a leap. What would actually be interesting is if an actor that was using makeup, wig, and clothing could Infiltrate and imitate Daisy well enough to fool Terry in his degraded condition. Because he doesn't have his mana sense currently.... Voice could be matched as well. He wouldn't normally be fooled but... Also his mana sense is down. I would have expected a stronger response from him upon waking. A feeling of blindness? I would have expected a larger response as he woke up. But. Trama.... Can really mess with ones head and he doesn't seem to be in a clear and steady state of mind.

BeauZoe

Welp, 26 posts so far in arc 7, with the arcs usually ending after 30 chapters. ~4 more gripping chapters to go. and I have a fantastic, joyous, creeping idea of what might happen. You left a clue in this chapter you sneaky author you. Reached real deep into that bag of chekov's guns I know you keep handy. I may be utterly wrong, or finely oooh so satisfyingly right, but this ride has been absolutely masterful regardless, promising an immensely satisfying climactic peak. I actually think I shouldn't outline what I'm thinking will happen, because it might ruin it for others. HOWEVER. That won't stop me from DMing you specifically with my idea. Every other time I've tried to guess at an outcome, you've pulled the rug out from under me only to reveal an even greater tapestry beneath it. *taps nose* I think I have you pegged this time. The dice are cast, oh knucklebones of fate. I'll see you next week! *dashes off manically laughing*

Jaiden Dunton

I can think of a few I would put out there as contenders but yah. Terry has it rough.

Usernames_are_annoying

Whyyyyyyy 😭

themainmememan

Holy fuck lmao. I do not believe I have seen a character in a fictional story suffer more than Terry has this entire arc. Jesus christ.

Aurora1325

really daisy, really.

BeauZoe

0-o oh dear... what a time to return.


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