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THE RIVALS, page 1(Maybe)
🕑 Added 2017-04-15 05:19:43 +0000 UTC This may end up being the beginning of The Rivals, or it may end up as it's own 3-5 page short story.Wendy Walters is going to be one of the main characters in The Rivals, and the story will be told from her point of view. She's ending her fighting career with these warehouse matches just as Annika and Paulina are beginning theirs, and ends up becoming the coach for both women. And it's Paulina and Annika trying to force Wendy to choose one of them over the other that's really driving their rivalry to extremes.
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Omar Isuf
where the rest of this story?
labeltornoff
The way a story begins is as important as how it ends. If you grab the audience, they'll stick with you. This is a smash-bang start, whether for the longer story or as a stand-alone. I'm hooked.
