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Chapter 11 of Through my Eyes, Again.
Here is the weekly chapter of TMEA. I do hope you are enjoying the story and would love to hear from you.
Quo vadis?
There is a curse: “May you live in interesting times!” which is usually linked to China, even though there is no evidence to support this. Wherever it is from, we are certainly all living in interesting times – far too interesting, I fear.It seems that every country either is already or will shortly be affected by Covid-19. The extent of the disaster each country experiences is going to be determined in part by the decisions our leaders mak...
Chapter 11 of Through my Eyes. Again.
Hello thereWherever you are, it is my sincere hope that this pestilence is passing by you and yours. Unfortunately, as I look across the world I see that the entire world is being affected and the Angel of Death is abroad, reaping a deadly harvest.All we can do is hunker down, practise good hygiene and take the gentlest care of one another - from an appropriate distance.It is my hope that this small offering of escape for a while to another world...
Through my Eyes. Again. - Chapter 10
And here's Chapter 10 of Through my Eyes. Again.As always, your comments and feedback are welcomed.Iskander
Should authors warn about difficult content?
In Through my Eyes. Again. the protagonist, Will, has been physically abused by his father since he was six years old. It is clear that whilst not approving of the violence, Will’s mother is compliant for some complex of reasons. The story depicts only one more such abusive incident, when Will’s father slaps him so hard he is thrown across the kitchen. Will’s reaction to this causes his mother to move to stop the abuse, but Will’s fear an...
Through my Eyes. Again. - Chapter 9
Hi there,I hope you are enjoying the story...it's very quiet here and at my Discord server. Over at Stories on Line there's a bit of comment, but nothing in depth...Anyhow...enjoy (I hope)...
Through my Eyes. Again. - Chapter 8
Hi thereHere's chapter 8 of TMEA.Enjoy (I hope:-).
Sex content in "Through my Eyes. Again"
A reader enjoying TMEA emailed me, musing on whether a story with minimal sex belonged on Stories Online (SOL). In order to explain why TMEA is posted on SOL, I need to cover a bit of ground - so please bear with me.As readers of this site know, this is my first 'public' attempt at storytelling - I have been toying with writing ideas for most of my life (including my childhood). But there was always something else more important in my lif...
Chapter 7: Through my Eyes. Again.
Hi folksHere's chapter 7 of TMEA.Enjoy!
Chapter 6: Through my Eyes. Again.
Hi thereAs I am going to be very busy tomorrow with my grandson's first birthday, here is chapter 6, a little bit early.
On chapter lengths in "Through my Eyes. Again."
It's been pointed out that chapter 4, posted earlier this weekend, is rather short. Coming in at only 2500 words, it is the shortest chapter in the book and about half the size of most chapters. I must admit that I don't watch chapter size as I write, rather it is the story that drives chapter length. Looking at the chapters to come, it seems that there is a definite trend for chapter size to increase as the book progresses - one chapter ...
Chapter 5 of "Through my Eyes. Again."
Hi thereHere is chapter 5 of TMEA - and Chapter 4 has been posted to SOL.Please leave comments and criticism at my Discord channel.Thanks
Chapter 4 of "Through my Eyes. Again."
Hi thereHere is chapter 4 of TMEA - and chapter 3 has been posted to SOL.Please provide feedback and comment at my discord channel.Tks
Through my Eyes. Again - chapter 3
HiHere is the final version of Chapter 3.
Through my Eyes. Again. The start of the final version
HelloMy self-imposed target was to complete this novel by the end of January and thereafter to post fortnightly chapters. Well, I have not finished the writing, but I am sufficiently advanced in completed chapters and completed story line to start posting weekly chapters.So, here are the first two chapters of the final version of TMEA. Chapters 1 & 2 are also renewed on Stories on Line. Chapter 3 is also here for patrons. I will be posting chapte...
After... (a short story)
I am still working on Through my Eyes. Again, but this short story has been bouncing around in head for several months. So, as a break from writing TMEA, I allowed After... to drift out of the shadows.The plagues that scoured the lands of people have affected women, giving some mental powers that are energised in a variety of ways. The remaining men lack such powers and fear those women. One morning, during her waking ritual, Harriet senses somet...
Chapter 4 available - and added a Sync server
Hi folksIn order make downloading and reading the chapters a bit easier, I have added a Sync shared folder (see below). This now has chapters 1-4 available for download.https://ln2.sync.com/dl/07874edc0/pkrt2gkw-9crqw9u8-7jkcbste-q6c8c6un
Added a discord server
So, I've finally worked out how to add a discord server. The link is https://discord.gg/EUj2eHH to join and provide feedback, commentary and editing assistance about TMEA.
Through my Eyes. Again.
Here is chapter 3 of TMEA.I would really appreciate your comments.
Through my eyes. Again. ... October 2019
I am a new author who is feeling their way around the online publishing world. As I have read many great stories at Storiesonline.net, I decided to start releasing this story on that site. I uploaded two chapters, hoping to get some feedback which would help guide and also help maintain the motivation of a part time author.Almost immediately I received some great encouragement, but also strong recommendations from many people (including authors f...
