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Chapter 331 unedited unmemed... mebbe unfinished?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CcH68D44ztCx4lAhcRfjUSsBYV4wpV2cPhJ9tMLOPTI/edit?usp=sharingI wanted to also do Rain's bit from Yuzhen's PoV, but it's gonna be long so i cut things short.Head throbbing from the influx of Sendings, Yuzhen closed her mind off and bowed her head, praying this First Imperial Grand Conference would end without conflict. It was an unreasonable request in light of the circumstances, but Yuzhen figured it...
Chapter 330 unedited unmemed
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jngGinLpnFpdpio1Vz8ggH7kDVLgmgXqJnvDU-0mRuc/edit?usp=sharingPropping myself up on the side of the skiff, I cant help but smile at the antics taking place. Cupped gently in the palm of his hand, my teacher turns in place and holds the green stone high, locked in a bitter struggle with the greedy and ever-persistent Mama Bun. Covered in octopus ink and slime, my dog-sized bunny is adorable sight as she leaps hi...
Unedited, unmemed... possibly unfinished.
Depending on how long the explanation takes, I may move it onto the next chapter. Usually after editing, ch's get longer too, and I feeel like I forgot sth in this ch. Will Get back to you all if there's more.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Zl0-UoauWiL9650wH0CsuFr7Vf10uDUQWYuuuCkF9J4/edit?usp=sharingNo one ever mentions it, but carrying a pole-arm around is incredibly inconvenient. First of all, you cant just lay it down for someone...
Chapter 328 finished, edited, and memed
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sxK76UQRVNyvx-mBm5LleR9qP2S9hJo0z8Sc6jHfAZQ/edit?usp=sharing Waking to the fragrant smell of roasted meat, Song gingerly extracted herself from the pile of slumbering animals and Lins tangled embrace. Frowning in her sleep, Lin grumbled and rolled over to claim another victim, clinging tightly to the comatose Mila with a contented murmur. Gazing upon their peaceful and contented expressions, Song imagined her...
Chapter 328 (Incomplete)
Was really struggling to finish this, but I think I need to sleep on it, or at least step away for a bit. Not happy with how it went, but can't quite say why. I haven't written the ending yet, so it's missing like a fifth or mebbe more. Sorry bout this, but i might just rewrite the whole thing. We'll see.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b3ssX2MihsXEXi0lnbRNeaydEy0ihcn1BK7oKz7AKJU/edit?usp=sharingWaking to the smell of fragrant,...
Chapter 327 unedited, but memed
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dgH1qd7_nq-wQE_IJ_4ZXMHTGOVsma-fsLW1fgJtqEU/edit?usp=sharingGoing over my presentation didnt take long because I didnt have much prepared. The meeting with the Legate is all a big game of show and tell, a wallet-measuring contest of the highest levels, and Akanai only had a few suggestions regarding delivery and tone. With that taken care of, she left me with a pat on the head and went back to her yurt, war...
Chapter 326 edited, polished, and memified
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DumEhUMX4BhOj8n9riLhDZsHr0GRBauqHBwS6e4ZZ9U/edit?usp=sharingIll ask you once more, youre certain this information is important enough to wake the boss?Pausing mid-drink, Jorani choked down his mouthful jerky and flatbread in his haste to answer. Sure as sure Mister Rustram, he croaked, regretting his decision as the half-chewed food sat painfully in his gullet. Dried rations and water were all he co...
Chapter 326 (Rough, unedited, and memeless)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yaagL59Rbv5U9vxoMMeZt7x8qa2cfOLI56s-AgziwKg/edit?usp=sharingIll ask you one more time: youre certain your information is important enough to wake the boss?Pausing mid-drink, Jorani swallowed his jerky and flatbread to answer. Sure as sure Mister Rustram, he croaked, regretting his hasty decision as the half-chewed food sat painfully in his gullet. Still, after seven days traipsing through the brush,...
Chapter 325
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1G3t2RRapnpsHbUQ4AZOId1ZiLEnfH5rSAJNU_asYc6Q/edit?usp=sharingTheres a point when unmitigated self-loathing gets so intense, you dont even feel like killing yourself anymore. You hate yourself so much, you think death would be too easy, so you want to suffer, need to suffer, because you deserve it. Its a feeling Im all-too familiar with, but today, I discovered what comes after self-loathing: cold indiffe...
Chapter 324
https://docs.google.com/document/d/176K0o_18RQlNWHaZyOGMmJ3DcWpLIp3WwojrUaDTjoA/edit?usp=sharingWhat do you wish to know?Faltering at the monks question, Baledagh took his time to think things through. He couldnt come right out and ask about transmigrated souls which possessed knowledge of other worlds, or multiple souls dwelling in one body, or even about Spectres and what they were. Although the monk appeared friendly and helpful, his m...
Chapter 323
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bTwmWWXX_BCUSd8s_MVQJok4mZcr6027704YaQxo5GM/edit?usp=sharingWhile coasting back to shore in Ping Pings grasp, Baledaghs celebratory mood came to an abrupt end as he noticed Mei Lin and Sumila waiting in ambush. With Li Song, the wildcats, and a horde of bunnies hopping about as reinforcements, Baledagh had no choice but to feign a smile and wave while wracking his brain for something Brother would say, some...
Chapter 322
Written, but unedited. Not even spellchecked.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ubvm6-XtXNOofNvPyxCw5OAOmdgjq6wOHYYD2RL9Oa8/edit?usp=sharingWith a long sigh of relief, Baledagh hugged Banjo close and thanked the Mother for her mercy. Sumilas powerful stomps fading into the distance were like music to his ears, freeing him from her ire for the next little while. She woke up earlier than expected and caught him just as he was about to sneak off ...
Chapter 321 updated
Has a proper ending, touched up the flow, and changed a bit in the middle. Rain/Bdawg makes an appearance.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kM8isqJRoSy9TYh4dQDPbVqO79jdhdiVFRXIbvHky8M/edit?usp=sharingLetting loose with a piteous moan, Mila prayed for a merciful end to this inhuman suffering. Cursing the twisted mind which devised this harrowing machine, she tried to ease her misery by rocking back and forth in her chair, but failed miserably an...
Chapter 321
This chapter isn't edited and the conclusion isn't written, mostly because I hated what I had and deleted it. There's still a bit more to cover in the ch, but here's what I got so far.Enjoy!https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kBvbXinLU9rM6IY7i5iCkXdW5BjNZuCkDafDYHL4X8U/edit?usp=sharingLetting loose with a piteous moan, Mila prayed for a merciful end to her inhuman suffering. Cursing the twisted mind which devised this harrowing ma...
Chapter 320 (Again)
Hey, I made a pretty big change to the back third of this chapter, in particular with how Song views life. Much less depressing and more in line with how she's developed. Also, since most ppl want it all posted on Patreon, I'll do that here, but I'll still leave the link to gdrive anyways.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1isEsv49ZhtI2fALJJo-Q0i9C8bjSFGisrsiYauwHV2Q/edit?usp=sharingFor as long as she could remember, Song prized her e...
Google Docs or straight up text?
Which format do you guys prefer for advance chs?
Chapter 320
Super unedited version, feeling too tired to do that atm.Also, not entirely sold on how this chapter went. Might make big changes. Dunno yet. We'll see after I sleep on it.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oV87y6O2eaYR2MNyWqHze5eeiGFN8POjEtFhI3d_NUE/edit?usp=sharing
Hey guys, trying something new.
So over Easter, I put a bit of extra time into writing and got a ch ahead. Since I also hit 100 patrons recently, I decided to release it here for everyone as a thank you for your support.As this is just a test, please don't mention this to anyone on discord or in comments anywhere. I don't know if this will be permanent, i.e always 1 ch or more ahead on Patreon, because I don't know if I can keep it up. I figured i have the ch, so mi...
Discord Channel
We now have a Savage Divinity Discord Channel! I'm in there every now and then, so drop by for a chat or to ask questions, or just hang out. All Patrons get a Warrant Officer role on the channel, which means you can upload pictures and files, use emoticons from other Discord Channels, and post reactions.Here is the Discord link.https://discord.gg/55M9bvbTo claim the Discord roles, you'll need to link your discord account to Patreon. This ...
Updated 215 Teaser
No new plot per say, just better edited.https://drive.google.com/open?id=1J6KSJso6t_vaBFeHe5HwXmgvBmTvl0-fXOSW-xvEm78
Chapter 215 Teaser
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1xMlzEqrETsD-hTITxfMuX5GqH7wWFpoZFP1w6tlQKB8Enjoy!
To anyone wishing to name something in Savage Divinity
First off, all of Rain's gear has already been chosen and named. Sorry.The cast list has listings of the weapons, with a very basic description and who wields them, or if you have a weapon in mind, I can give it to one of the characters who has yet to reveal theirs.You can also name a Form, or city, or place, or whatever. Email me at ruffwriter@outlook.com, or message me on Patreon and we can discuss it.The forms already available are here: h...
Google Drive Link
Please don't share with other people, or I will have to resort to adding each Patron individually. Honor system d^^bhttps://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B7vJZLjMunEANnZ3OGJDcDVPeE0&usp=sharing
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If you would like to be mentioned in the chapter posts, please email me at ruffwriter@outlook.com with the name you'd like me to use, or post it here.
