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For several months now, I've been struggling to write; if it wasn't obvious enough. I've tried a few things to help, but it hasn't worked. I used to be able to write 5 chapters a week, and now I am struggling to keep up with two chapters.This all started going downhill when I was fortunate enough that all of you guys have made it so I can fully support myself entirely through this, but this also made it easy to adopt an unhealthy ...
Chapter 207: Inner Bond
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_Gv9FQrMmKD8v4_HYxozetyHZP0_THfjNnG2qqT6WVs/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________A Roc flies majestically high in the sky, looking regal and proud as it scans the ground for prey. The large beast resembles a falcon with long forward-facing horns. It coats itself in earth mana, not...
Chaper 206: Mountain Lightning
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1os6P_0lyielPjmg2vScg1VODzEtvAFHCLVT3PR7jm2c/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________I started this ritual expecting worse results, so I am quite content with the outcome, even if I hoped for more. The Diadem did, however, become exalted tier, even if it’s on the lower end of the ti...
Yae's Journey 6
Bakan leads Yae to his storage room, where numerous monster materials are shelved.“Most of this stuff I can’t find ah use for,” Bakan merrily says with an accent, pulling out a large crate with ease, revealing hardened leathers. “These are excess materials or ones that never made it into a piece of armor or weapon, so feel free to use what ya can find in this room.”Yae nods as Bakan leaves to continue his work, leaving her alone.She spe...
Chapter 205: Magic Princess
-----Break next week, see you next month!AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qlfLFVyhTv1Hl_yIr7WP6YVFM4X8vGkHz4tZpct6gKU/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________After marveling at the patterns of mana being produced by the tree I harvest an appropriate branch for my weapon upgrades and use my Bond to heal it along with an e...
Chapter 204: Heroic Trees
-----Announcement: I am changing the tiers slightly. the 1$ five chapter ahead tier is now ten chapters ahead and the 4$ ten ahead is now fifteen chapters ahead. nothing major will change since we were already fourteen chapters ahead.As for why I am making this change I am now posting to Fantranslations which pays a small amount per view from adsense so making that the new 5 ahead will hopefully be slightly more beneficial while give the free rea...
Chapter 203: Vitality Training
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-NbcCfXhZOI6RIhR-lvTdBEs3e_F9C0EoqFwqWJsWmc/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________I cast my gaze over the mountainous region of the Dungeon, which, to my surprise, extends well beyond the full area of my perception. The mountain range stretches well over two thousand kilometers wit...
Chapter 202: Dungeon Again
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-zjAJzSdLzPj9zjqlK2XEPEoz1UJWg6QgmMQw50xbyw/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________After spending time with my family, I returned home to Kayafe.“Thank you” I bow to Kayafe with gratitude for giving me the push I needed.“It’s the least I could do for freeing and helping me,...
Chapter 201: Family
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/173Pi-dzZau_MwINPlDEp3eDJ-WgHWA8RX7WkGt-VsHU/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Ting! The Saintess of Mana and Magic, Alysara, the Runalymo, has discovered how to cleanse cursed Skills!She did it. Relief fills Kayafe as her worries prove unfounded. Could she and Safyr have been a...
Chapter 200: Movements on the Mainland
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/18upQkIRvGmGAjoMk1xMQM4pxuhF9Lp3k9TImfMxoZV8/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Emperor Alexander stands in the middle of a battlefield, pieces of dwarven war machines are cast about everywhere as if suffering the aftermath of a series of explosions. Melted fragments of the soul ...
Yae's Journey 5
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XI06wr9V5lt_N3fTEAPjrd8Mj5BF8IzUdnOwPQk_0-s/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Yae walks down the dirt street, her thick winter clothes keeping the chill away. All kinds of people, from Gnolls to Orcs and anyone else unable to hold a job. Some loiter around with ragged clothes e...
Chapter 199: Other's Perspective 3
-----Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/14yvvDTAeRqhrXmnVG49MkpeSZqHGoOmj7QpIJdplZgQ/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________“The rebellion has captured and killed three governors so far...”Sentaro Klaman listens to the report, sitting at a round table with the rest of the administrators.“The people refuse to pay the incr...
Chapter 198: The Cleansing Evolution
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-jP8MXyVnKIM2c5pthhK-ZDM_5VDNx0wwSuDI6o0vEA/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________“What can you tell me about titles?” I ask Safyr.“Titles always grant a large bonus of some kind, usually equalling the bonus you’d get from the legendary tier; however, some can be weaker. Ma...
Chapter 197: Kayafe and Safyr
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1joNvqfqlpCVeAvpKABP_7gMvM1SZb1tkEAB-wyYG72I/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________48th Breakthrough: You have used perceptive beams to attack another's perceptive eye; this will help you engage in perceptive battles.I got this after training with Ruluna for a bit, and now that ...
Chapter 196: Time Lagged
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ouaTwyKBYLXJ_FyIRk9Nf1lP7q2vHnMtCM1B9qJ2Nb8/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Kayafe wakes up with a jolt as pressure builds up around her, squeezing and crushing her as if trying to shove her through a too-small hole. Panic rises inside her as the pressure increases, but at th...
Chapter 195: Sacrifice
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fqrWZybtqYPQ4GPMjvdKpXcWqSKQgq-UFk3kVE1U1-Q/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________I carefully examine the infected before me; most have surface-level infections that can easily be cut away and healed. The problem is those that suffered injuries and have corruption deeper inside the...
chapter 194: Eldritch Invasion
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vjs6wkls5koUFbwPRg9UJRdYWZLSVoIlYYMesZS3doM/edit?usp=sharing_______________________________________________________________________________________A creature of writhing tentacles shifts into this layer, granting Safyr the chance to [Analyze] it.Ǝ̸̢͓̲͉̞̒̀́̽̿l̵̨̤̺̻̲̇̆̽́̈b̴̼̙̹̤͚̋͌̏̀̚ɿ̷̡͖̥͕̣̀͋̓͠͝...
Chapter 193: Perceptive Attack
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IKf9wlZFJ2eRnLPYcDm1cI_PbSA2kPVgn4nxp2Q6hKU/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________“I’ll think about it,” I reply to Klaman’s rechallenge. “There are some people I want to consult first.”Plus, I want some time to prepare and try to cap my [Sense Magic], although I’m no...
Side story 8: Kayafe
Alysara hasn’t talked to me for a while now. Kayafe mentally sighs.It’s hard to keep track of time in the Mana Arc, but she can tell a long time from a short time. Normally she would go dormant and wait for the young girl, but she never came. It’s not the first time this has happened, as life often throws obstacles in one's way.She’s probably busy curing her cursed skills or anima.It reminds her of the time Dwohl was so focused on cur...
Computer died.
Went to turn on my computer and it wouldn't turn on. It makes loud clicking sounds and the CPU light on the motherboard is flashing so I assume my CPU is dead. If any of you are more tech savvy and can confirm if it's the CPU then please let me know.
Chapter 192: Bidding War
-----AN: Taking a break next week see you all next month! I will still be releasing a side chapter sometime in the next few days for the 10$ tier patrons.Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CXyWSNugnyOWPzp96zq85CLf8e7lPHAC7edtW2ynFKs/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Sentaro Klaman hides in the corner of the meeting place...
Chapter 191: An Offer
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Chapter 190: Healer
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Jry8m_JAu_em37_Gy_CMvpSQp0rbM-IXlcCqal4OGfE/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Grand Healer of Helikan, Lorana Lanya, prepares for the arrival of her guest, ordering the maids to hang decorative banners and replacing the normal carpet with soft Floryn silk carpet. Lanya has alwa...
World Building Update: Language
This month I am finally working on completing the Runalymo language (Last week there was no world building week because I was working on this). There are around nine hundred syllables/letters so that's nine hundred possible concepts that can be used to make words. This is further increased to over two thousand when adding modifiers like pitch accent to indicate amount/severity and drawn out pronunciation (or something else) to indicate the op...
Chapter 189: Around the Island in eight hours
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vXdsGMHp-XQ9DIPzSquVChhFDO7lzIAXTmaYAMMvwfI/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________“To summarize the Elder’s decision about your request,” Alysara says, “They feel that giving you this opportunity may break neutrality and be seen as obvious support.”Governor Vanu Runa Orla...
Chapter 188: A New Market
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/12WPKu5gtMn-2K1jMTjTEywvGW7iD6vSydhO7Hw-DIR4/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________After the negotiations with the Lunaley, we return to the airship. The Elders take off their thick clothes after stepping into the comfortable atmosphere of the Entylamo. They go to the meeting room t...
Chapter 187: International Negotiations
-----AN: AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OIUsQUwDqjPhgKUcvaw39VFOAAoMsAGm1NHe6t3wiuQ/edit?usp=sharing_____________________________________________________________________________“Have you [Analyzed] the ship yet? Borala whispers to Orlan.“I have not,” Orlan says but does so immediately.The Entylamo (Exalted):Created by the most knowledgeable master of mana and magic, ...
Chapter 186: To Boldly Go
AN: See any typos? Suggest them here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PXwugN26T9tA9-Aqml8hcYFwpgRvDsD-UUddYVJYlIQ/edit?usp=sharingJust a heads up I will be taking next week off.____________________________________________________________________________“Do you really have to go?” Mom asks, trying to convince me to stay. “Can’t you just go there with your clones?”“I can, but what if I need to be there? This is to restore my anima, a...
Yae's Journey 4
A customer enters the shop, the bell ringing to get her attention. A large grey-skinned man with two rows of swept-back horns and large tusks jutting from his lower jaw scans the shop, looking at the luxurious furniture displayed. He wears a violet mana silk suit and stands straight-backed with an arrogant air about him.“Welcome to Karn’s Fu—” Yae says, but the Orc cuts her off with a wave of his hand.“Didn’t think a Fylox would be in...
Chapter 185: Eve of Departure
AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l5Uuo4ybVZO3qHymqzqYXRgLRU0NMCxp8y5L0iNmeF0/edit?usp=sharing_______________________________________________________________________________I wake up with the familiar sight of my old room around me, and as I move my stiff body, I am instantly crushed in an embrace as my mom hugs me.“Aly! You’re awake! Oh, thank Myrou! I thought we lost you...
