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De'Vas Chronicles Book 4: Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2025-05-14 04:18:08 +0000 UTC

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Chase Kilgore

Thanks man! I got it fixed!

Sean

Hayley turned at the sound of a moving BRUSH. Should be BUSH.

Chase Kilgore

Good suggestion man! Got it switched, thank you!

Mation Amalga

"He arrived at them in an instant and threw his arms around her in a hug. Haylee embraced him and saw many of the tails slow down or stop." I think you should replace "her" with "Haylee" and "Haylee" with "She". The sentence seems awkward since it isn't clear who Ash went to hug first. Thank you for the chapter!


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