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Chapter 352 (Maybe trash tier)
Finally finished. Wasn't helped that my stupid computer started a stupid update when i was almost done, but it's done now, so there's that.That said, I'm almost 100% certain I hate almost everything about this chapter, and may actually rewrite it or even scrap it altogether. Dunno, will see how i feel after food and sleep.As for why, well... I'd explain, but that'd probably be another ch length of ranting. Suffice it to sa...
Late again
Sorry.BTW, do you guys want me to actually post I'm gonna be late, or you just happy to leave it be and let the chapter come whenever?
Chapter 351 rough as sandpaper
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WbHFZ6Brffs_dutf70E-t-RuYMUJDSd_8LTItp-iM2o/edit?usp=sharingTime to wake sweet child, the day waits for no one.Groaning in reply, Yan retreated into the comforting darkness beneath her firm pillow and away from the dazzling light of the morning sun. Merciless as always, Eun yanked the silk covers off Yans body and pinched the back of her thigh, the chill morning air and painful tweak burning away the last...
Chapter 350
Sorry for late ch, no internets :'(Here it is tho.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jJcmrEwRuMNYqoYwo2y3-mSbtCVO-ZmIJEMBDTAX-R4/edit?usp=sharingI find it amusing that despite all her talk of courtesy and customs, Luo-Luo is so starstruck she almost forgets to curtsy for the Legate. She has plenty of book smarts but is completely lacking in real life experience, a caged songbird seeing the world for the very first time. Then again, in her de...
Chapter 349
ending is rushed and badly written, but it gets the point across.And to think, i was THIS close getting the patreon ch out alongside the regular one... SO close... :'(https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bhkUo3riBVSuZMmyVuwahfmlMml4MbkkNePav_4Kd7U/edit?usp=sharingThe phantasm peeled away and Luo-Luo came to with a shuddering gasp, waking to a world seeped in fear and shadows. Heart pounding in her heaving chest, she ran her fingers over her ne...
Chapter 348
This ch only covered half of what i wanted, so I might extend it if the rest isn't enough for another chapter. We'll see.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iuzt8J5xs5at_coqam2PKqlXES2hnHVsDTB-vaKtAjI/edit?usp=sharingOddly enough, this wasnt the worst wedding banquet Ive attended.My dry wit remains wholly unappreciated as my guests sit in shocked silence, staring at me like Im some sort of monster. I feel kinda bad for making th...
Chapter 347
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MB3JMv0n5hgfYO-i3gmXS1cI8lKSOJzsZsie13CGZPU/edit?usp=sharingAs the Bekhai Khishigs marched out to surround the gathered guests, visions of bitter conflict and slaughtered nobles flashed through Yuzhens mind. Reacting a beat too slow, she ran on stage dragging Gerel behind her, hoping to talk some sense into Baatar before her premonitions came to pass. With blade drawn and teeth bared, he was no longer the qui...
Late again
sorry. Ate too much meat and having trouble finding my focus. Dbl srry considering it such a big cliff and long time, but such is life.My bad. I am not a good boy. Sadface.
Chapter 346 super rough and kinda rushed.
Rushed the ending a little, will flesh it out, but POKER CALLS so fuck all yall.Sorry. I just love gambling so much...K enjoy.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l12eBBYhl7oDxERFhqoZvWAXBvN7kZvCbHZozuabXvs/edit?usp=sharingPatron Keifru, Sam anonChecking the mirror for the umpteenth time, Luo-Luo straightened her hair piece and smoothed out her dress, though neither were out of place to begin with. Fanning herself to keep from perspiring, she took...
Delay
Ch 346 will come tomorrow probably, but saturday at the latest for sure.Maybe.Cuz you know... I might get hit by a bus or sth. Who knows.
Chapter 345 v.1.0
The ending is still up for debate. I might add more or I might leave it as is. dunno, but I'm out of time today, so here it is. Enjoy,.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uonncDUqR9KLE16RQQVXf2UW7N5uGlcVG9mk2pW7qCk/edit?usp=sharingAfter ninety minutes of smiling and saluting, the seemingly endless stream of guests finally slows to a trickle, giving me time to ease my tortured cheeks and soothe my parched throat. Draining the teacup in a singl...
Chapter 344
Hi. I'm back. Check the chapter on RR for pictures and update :DAlso, considering it's the 24th and the month is almost over, I realize it's not fair to you all. If anyone wants a refund for the month, message me and i'll try to make that happen, either through patreon or paypal, whichever easiest. No hard feelings.Now, chapter. Took me literally all week to write, because I kept starting over in a new PoV. Blergh. Enjoy :Dhttps:/...
Chapter 343 v 2.0
more polished and with an ending, but no meme and way too long. dunno wat I'll do about that, but meh.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dJ9mibSv-YY8upWzTr67ym2OjD1ljv1yzZqOtHlmywk/editStriding through the carpeted hallway, Zian paid no attention to the palatial furnishings or opulent decor, his thoughts focused on the tribulations ahead. Tonight marked a turning point in his life, easily the most crucial performance of his life. Success or ...
Ch 343 (incomplete)
Didn't round out the conclusion, but time is up. Will finish when err... well, I feel like it, pretty much. So yea. Enjoyhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1rJsoodjgcgFQP_Bu1ZqAgNHFmJwFbIrUIobTWdWASr8/edit?usp=sharing Striding through the carpeted hallway, Zian barely glanced at the palatial furnishings or opulent decor, his attention focused on the tribulations ahead. Tonight would be the most challenging night of his life and if he couldn...
Chapter 342
Scrapped my original plan, which was for a parade through the city (Rain's idea to save money) to show LuoLuo off while they go visit his parents. Once there, he'd be told he had to throw a banquet anyways, and sadness ensues, but Sarnai smacks him upside the head. Felt it was stupid halfway through writing it and did this instead.This means 343 will come to patreon tomorrow, or possibly much...much... later, cuz PoE starts are filled wit...
Chapter 342 1.0
The costs of Rain's retinue needs adjusting, and I'm probably going to cut the whole explanation about numbers out, and just leave LuoLuo's reactions, giving me more room to work with. Gonna go walk do and look at it again, but enjoy for now.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1axK5mQ_wenMVJURHfAVAaB-WfJs40fkFgvR4nzjXjYM/edit?usp=sharingThe more Luo-Luo learned about Falling Rain, the more peculiar he seemed.Having overheard sweet Tali...
Chapter 341
Author's note: Tentative ending on the ch. It feels like not much happened and I'm not too happy about it, but I wanted to have Mila's thoughts on the whole matter aired out and that took most of the chapter. I hafta do some actual work now, so that's it for today, but I might add more later on.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AACuDd_f4LC4178GQLww7EO-lLWmqLbyxS5ndejRmAs/edit?usp=sharingAfter a short break for lunch, the Imperia...
Delayed 341
Sorry, late chapter. will be up tomorrow, like, 16-24 hours from time of this post. i considered posting an unfinished one, but a vote on discord turned that idea down, so if you sad, join discord and never leave so this doesn't happen again.
340 redux (still unedited)
So I'm not gonna lie, I didn't really do anything about all your comments. Yea rain seems mean, but like... he thinks Luo-Luo's a spy. He's not gonna be all kind and sweet. I still did some rewriting, because the original ch did not convey the tone i wanted or really get to the points i wanted presented. So, here y'll go. It's different enough, so read it :Dhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/16ULf9osMxofy2FXRRqjLoDt3LLQIXv...
Chapter 340 unedited as per usual
Not entirely content with this. May make sweeping changes. we'll see.https://docs.google.com/document/d/17H7uLXwoTz6Oo8djBs7Lv0j6Cd3DIZR7LnfNVZFyLHk/edit?usp=sharingLuo Luo had much to be aggrieved about.During her graduation ceremony, shed drawn the eye of every Noble, Royal, Imperial in the room as she was presented on stage. Theyd seen her poetry compositions, calligraphy scrolls, painting exhibits, and dance routine, with only the mus...
Chapter 339 zero editing.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15ser32KqiB2HItJOnj46ORuwGxbrDEIeL6nkliG66ms/edit?usp=sharingIn the last twenty-four hours, Ive been forced to accept a lot of hard truths about myself.For example, I now know that I am bat-shit crazy and have been talking to myself as a coping mechanism for almost three years now. On the flip side, I also learned that I am incredibly adept at compartmentalizing my problems, setting them aside, and leaving the...
Chapter 338 v 1.0
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ygj2Y6BPCKeDkvV7E1wFZMAKIKMMeT2EETgJmasRk7c/edit?usp=sharing Hands trembling and jaw clenched, Luo-Luo smoothed her dress and patted her hair in an effort to calm herself as she waited for permission to disembark. The Mother was truly unfair to Her children, but Luo-Luo was determined to endure. Clutching her handkerchief, she faked a demure smile and lamented her fate, regretting all the hard work and effort s...
Chapter not done. Come back tomorrow.
Sorry, my brain already in vacation mode, plus the chapter harder to write than expected and I have a dinner thing to get to. Maybe I'll finish by tonight, but tomorrow for sure.
Chapter 337 v 1.0
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SEkoHy6iSVUPvDvyBLbC3ljg4Ghrjvecvxk2ASyoUI4/edit?usp=sharing I finally did it.Gazing out over the crowd, I soak in the applause and adulation I so desperately desired for so many years. Ive made it big now. After seven long years, with no cheat, the roughest of starts, and almost dying who knows how many times, here I am standing at the forefront of my peers, the number one talent in the Empire. While they mi...
Chapter 336 v1.0
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z1aiJjn_tvvPQvrefZBw6-4WNeJsdQO-fz5UA_OAr1I/edit?usp=sharingMight change the ending. Dunno.Du Min Yan felt neither fear nor anxiety as she stood before the largest audience the Empire had ever seen. This was her moment in the sun, with millions of people watching as she stood across from her formidable opponent, Wu Gam. His match against Yong-Jin showed just how strong the adorable half-fox warrior was, easily ...
Chapter 335 first draft (so like, maybe worse than unedited.)
The ending is a little lacklustre atm, mostly because my original plan is gonna be way too long. I'll write the rest of it and see if i can find a nicer place to end, (or nicer way), and we'll do that.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rr3NomyEV1PqaBAiGIkBjdWpVt6wLck1E0pSatJAUXg/edit?usp=sharingMind reeling from Dastans utterly domineering performance, Im left with one single question rattling around my brain.What in the actual fuck?...
Chapter 334 same as always, unedited, unmemed, AND UNFILTERED!!!!!!!!
Sorry had to do it. Alrighty, enjoy!https://docs.google.com/document/d/1A2OYkvcwWp7IqqO5aquO9RIn-ZQs6BKgu8JdgO1WTcI/edit?usp=sharingChest swelling with pride, Dastan stood tall at the bosss side, thoroughly enjoying the looks of confusion and consternation from the other retinues. Every time he heard someone call Falling Rain the Undying Savage, Dastans ire would rear its head and hed be forced to quash it down, but after this stunning ...
No advanced chapter today
Because I released a double chapter on RR, so check that out. Will have another chapter here on tues (which won't be on RR until thursday), then advanced chapter back on thursday.
Chapter 332 ver 2.0 unedited yadda yadda
Basking in the spotlight, I ride onto the docks with head held high and chest out, playing my role of Number One Talent in the North to perfection. I thought Id be nervous with all the attention, but on the contrary, I feel invigorated and excited knowing millions of eyes are watching me as I ride up to meet the Legate. Its just one of many changes Ive noted since my revelation, a part of my personality I siphoned off to my second self. Thi...
Chapter 332 late, unedited and all that
This one's a doozy. I literally wrote like 5k words, but cut out 800 for ch 333. I might take more from this ch and move it to 333, because holy shit 4200 words is too much.And that's pre edit. Usually it gets longer when I add in flavour and stuff.k. it's 9:20 pm and i need to eat dinner now, so bye!Edit: 9:55pm and i just got home. The second I stepped away from this ch, i realized i need to rewrite it. First as Rain's PoV and t...
