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Page 11
As you can see, I made a huge adjustment. I decided the motion lines around her breasts didn't really look good so I removed them. It just looked like she had really weird nips.
Page 11 Flats
Redid the vag
Page 10
Transitioning from Paizuri to vaginal was something I had to think about and approach several times over, and I'm still not satisfied. The important thing to me was a sense of intimacy.
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This is a page where I wasn't satisfied with it so I went back and redid the last panel. I think thats pretty obvious.
An interview
I did an interview not too long ago. Some of you may be interested.
Page 9
Little tid bit. The only person in the comic that will have thought bubbles is Toph, because she's the one telling the story and the only thoughts she was aware of was her own. But that doesn't mean that other characters don't have internal dialogue. I'm just gonna try and let you sus out what they're thinking.Also, this is probably my favorite page because its the one I spent the most time on and redrew over and over.
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Sometimes I feel like hentai over loads itself with dialogue with characters describing everything that they're feeling with perfect clarity even if they have a cock down their throat. It takes me out of it. I even thought about doing the first 13 pages without any dialogue whatsoever, but decided against it. Except with this page where nothing felt right. Hopefully you understand whats going on by what I've drawn.
