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Chapter 234: Diggers
-----Ok, no Dwarven cities this chapter. Also, there is a minor cliff. I'll try to get the next chappy done by friday.AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1D7J7BP1caLl-0OMQ-f9nAHmSa_n6-hrr_nH82WRYWMc/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Today’s the day of my spying mission.Back at Lunaley, I’m sitting on a comforta...
Chapter 233: Reporting Back
-----Next Chappy, a look into the Dwarven cities!AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qV2RPHozFzep-oUtp3HSq9-gdZJhkLUlwxU6-uUBbBI/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________“Yrania?” I call out, and wait for her response. “I know you’re here.”“The whole point of staying hidden is so my presence doesn’t interfere w...
Chapter 232: Transparency
-----No cliff again!This chapter wound up being too long, so I split it up into two chapters, so there should be another coming out tomorrow; all that really needs to be done is the post-chapter POV for the next chapter.AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lTrnSd3wO6rn8JI3UfrKHmuUdIoJ0OjAE8xt2gjLuWY/edit?usp=sharing_________________________________________________________________...
Chapter 231: Trusting Fate
-----No cliff! Horray!AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/15excAW9uOJr6LeeJHdJsFBBgO3owWcl4R6-PmGGS0NU/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________“Tell me about your visit to the Nexus,” Alexander asks Lin.Alexander and Lin are the last ones left in the meeting room.“I wasn’t there for very long. I did as I was trained,...
Chapter 230: Mission Briefing
-----Sorry this one took another week to do but it's twice the size of a normal chapter so I guess it counts for two.No cliff! Horray!AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1us-QK9R9jMm14cHMXBqZjLnPCBNVX6o69_5G6d_zJls/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________A crowd gathers as my airship splashes down in the harbor. I maneuv...
Chapter 229: Murky Foresight
-----CLIFF WARNING!!!! Proceed at your own peril.AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xlV2YOK6J7A8E8UuDrv4TzHqZpz_Vs0IuwZo6XgVGQs/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Calamity Egg? Is it somehow related to the Reality Eater? Is that why my status as the Archive of Eternity is reacting to it? This has never happened before...
Chapter 228: The Egg
-----CLIFF WARNING!!!! Proceed at your own peril.AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DcbzsRpI1aD7IPJ7tnARQnh2BAs1wqifJy0h1KNU7HM/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________I watch as Lin continues to try and find out how the Airship works, examining the walls and muttering to himself.“We’ll reach land in about half an hour...
Chapter 227: The Hidden Threat
-----Sorry this chapter took so long, I had a hard time writing the Clone POVAN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CcSMpXKQNbS0GsgEo98SHTBmfS0Mltwi4GHUVv0MJGY/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Oathbound Lin would love to stay and observe these Runalymo more, but the Dwarves won’t wait, and he can always come back to d...
Chapter 226: Oathbound Lin
-----Big chapter this time, twice the size of a normal chapter!AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1e7102yEEj920gTghuYwARwKomYlWR9qHUVcxLnwsjB8/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Lin watches as the dragon flies off without even telling him where to find Alysara or Kayafe.“I guess she doesn’t mind me staying for a wh...
Chapter 225: Ambient Magic
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ql8nQFCdylMjUYu8RFoxvdqU4oBFimkZnQh2IRqWG8w/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________“Grand Healer.” The guards salute Lanya as we arrive at the Helikan palace. They eye me with extra scrutiny but otherwise make no moves.“Don’t mind them,” Lanya says. “It’s their job to ...
Chapter 224: Trust
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cGsSjOyNPZQ8dsPZPR2NBu2WZzFf4MDHaqxipGSPhqw/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________“By the gods, what did you do?!” Kayafe says.“I didn’t think it’d be that powerful!” I say, panic setting in as a powerful shockwave sweeps across the sea, churning up a massive wave.I may...
Chapter 223: Light of Annihilation
Sorry for the slow posting this month, I've been working some things out. Basically, I have what is called Maladaptive Daydreaming, which doesn't sound like a problem, but for me it is. Simply put, Maldaptive Daydreaming is a very active imagination that causes issues in life, like when trying to fall asleep but being unable to because my mind is way too active.This is a particular problem for me because when writing I try to imagine the ...
Chapter 222: Transformation
CLIFF WARNING! Proceed at your own peril.-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PRjcj4BuzOsU3vOinWaLc-sCHcywpkwFREeLuJB4Cwg/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________It turns out that the body is actually quite good at expelling miasma, and the longer I look, the more I can see what appears to be veins in the body that the ...
Notice
Sorry for all you who have been experiencing issues with patreon lately, I have no idea what's going on so I am just going to say fuck it and make the chappies public for the rest of the month, that should allow everyone to see chappies this month. again, sorry for the issues.
Chapter 221: Consequences
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MANvBfB9OHXZRChVCcXf-J3m9BCxl4cIt8dMx93osFc/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Grand Healer of Helikan, Lorana Lanya, can’t help but sigh as she rests her forehead on her palm.“So you’re telling me the principal let that student continue with dangerous experiments?”“He...
Chapter 220: Arrogance
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OchtRrvDKbGXWfosMRbd9AYRJb_XU9kZ41k3KqjhUT4/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________I sit back in the airship, flying toward the healer nation Helikan; the First ship will only be making its rounds in Vocana, but I need to talk to Lanya and Klaman, which this ship is traveling toward...
Chapter 219: Ancient Meets Lunaley
Archmage Holuna Ruluna stands at the docks, along with Governor Orlan and Headmaster Vulpun. They watch as not one, not two, but five Runalymo ships made out of mana soar through the sky!“If just one of those is enough to siege a city, then we are fortunate they are allies,” Orlan remarks, wearing a grim expression.One of the airships moves to land at the docks while the others fly over the city and toward the other cities.“Something concer...
Notice
Sorry for not posting. I've recently been having a hard time writing and struggling with writer's block. Every time I try to write, nothing comes to me even though I know where I want to take this story.I'll be taking the rest of the month off, but to apologize for the missed month and slow releases I'll be giving the next two month free. So I wont be charging for Janurary and Feburary.I'll try to remain productive and find my...
Chapter 218: Takeing Off
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ExTS_VRUy0CKrp90xhzvVp37DakkwA4FoUid8WMLMLA/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Ting! Your Bond skill, Beauty Explosion, has evolved into Prismatic Explosion!Ting! Your Bond skill, Beauty Empowerment, has evolved into Beauty Enrichment!Ting! Your Bond skill, Intensify Beauty, has...
Chapter 217: Familiar
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lDTF6ZRIH4gDzLg4RQejn_XntKlX7dliNbp3DPjfqw8/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Ting! Your Bond skill, Aurora Prism, has evolved into Star Prism!Ting! Your Bond skill, Beauty Gatling, has evolved into Beauty Auto Cannon!Ting! Your Bond skill, Star Cannon, has evolved into Conjure...
Yae's Journey 7
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/129BFptKmt8a04C7twbPanDLTlYJPvNIzt_T9bjYH374/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________“How much does it pay to be a monster slayer?” Yae asks, mostly to make small talk for their long walk back to the city.“Depends,” Faela shrugs. “Weak monsters, or, as we tend to call it, ve...
Chapter 216: True Illusions
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NxTByO5M0nnhrqjxa4EotFM_6KaoaH2MyeHMUkaX0ic/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________I learned a lot about primordial mana after two weeks. It supercharges mana, enchantments, and spells to the same degree that my applying magic via [Manipulate Magic] does. This supercharging is multi...
Chapter 215: Skill Trading
-----From now on, I'll be adding a little extra scene at the end of some chapters detailing what Aly's clones are doing. I've been meaning to show them doing something for a while since they don't feel like they are doing anything. This will help me keep the story moving with the main body while having more mundane slice of life moments with her clones or have skill growth that won't interrupt the flow of the story.AN: Got som...
Chapter 214: Urolon
Two hundred nineteen years ago:Urolon swung his hammer down, shaping the ectoplasm and bonding it to the metal beneath. Again and again, he swung his hammer bending reality each time with his Bond, too absorbed in his work to notice another presence enter his forge.“Ohohoho! Practicing, are we?” Like an ancient tome repeatedly being shut, the laughter of an old man greeted Urolon’s ears.He stopped forging mid-swing for a moment to register ...
Chapter 213: Saintess's Anguish
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BUP4JC79iGx-u3RNdkbaOU8QFGnPzw6sjf9HVTvjlWs/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Interesting… I got a level for sensing primordial mana but no level for [Manipulate Magic]. I always get the ‘first use’ level, but I suppose it doesn’t count if I have help? If that is the ca...
Chapter 212: Primordial Mana
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nb_jfQX1xTaHOYkzpPHqhWnw5lIkDg4wNuxWAYd9EIk/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________I now have an inscription core that produces light, but how’d it get there from the inscription that transforms mana into light mana? It’s possible that the core is translating the inscription int...
Chapter 211: Challenger
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZQxe_Fa_dVWSbzE-XZmPtBPSiiCzHpDuJgHcKmFXtV4/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________I watch as Safyr flies out to Urolon, who takes a humanoid form with strong facial features, pointy ears, short hair, and a muscled build wearing blacksmith leather clothes.They talk for several minut...
Chapter 210: A surprise visit
-----Major cliff warning! Proceed at your own risk!AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pRQw8lxjHyIu_upbcwx5ajIrgthQgSgt6Q-hjv9-I9Q/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________The Stygian watches as a pillar of dark mana engulfs the Prismatic Butterfly breaking apart its spells as the sheer amount of dark mana repels the beauty ...
Chapter 209: Nipping the Bud
-----I'll be taking this month's break a week early, so no chapter for friday 21, but I will still be working on monday's chapter to catch up.Been working on my sleep schedual and exercise. It's been a bumpy road so far and it's hard to try and not fall back into bad habits.AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fbB3r0l94eYojlIWKIA_sbjRPZQvlXtc8vAWLLqRiNM/edit?u...
Chapter 208: Bond Resonance
-----Thank you all for your understanding and support. I am working on getting healthier and establishing good habits, but it's a slow process.AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CIJxbkPDcogr41CrZ72WNah7H9num8hTMyTIbZLuYSU/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________How’d that thing sneak up on me?! Why didn’t I notice ...
