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HomeLuz Arc 17
Finally, I actually finish an arc ahead of time.
Title Poll
Okay, I need help deciding on the title for this Helluva Boss comic. Which is better?
Who You Sound Like draft
No punchline for this one. Just wanted people to feel bad.I don't think I'm satisfied with the title either. I was also thinking "Loona's Attitude Problem" or "The Weight on Loona's Mind." I still need to think it over.
HomeLuz Arc 17 sketch (re-upload)
I've started working on the next arc.I know these Hunter arcs are unpopular, so this is the last one, I promise. I just wanted to have one more in-between arc between the last time we saw him and when we'll eventually see him in the present.Also, this arc is also meant to show some of Kikimora's insecurities.
Royal Tease
Some tweaks to the dialogue and an actual title that I like.
Teasing the Stepfamily inks
I wonder if I should make it clear that Stolas doesn't recognize Loona to avoid commenters accusing me of incest or inappropriate age-gaps.
Closet Swap 2 sketch
So both pages it is, then.
Which is funnier?
Just the first page alone or with both pages?PG 1Panel 1: Stolas walks into Octavia's bedroom, its door already open. He casually knocks on the doorframe.STOLAS: Knock, knock, dear. Would you be interested in going with daddy to...P2: From Stolas point of view, we see the same last panel as the previous comic, with Octavia and Loona wearing each other's clothes, with Octavia grabbing Loona's shoulders. They all look at each other unco...
Next Comic Idea (Helluva Boss)
I've scripted the next comic idea but I feel like it could use some re-working. Maybe something funnier should be said or the characters should be doing something more?What do you think?"PG 1Panel 1: Octavia, in her room, is sitting on her bed. She looks up when a voice calls out to her.LOONA (off-panel): Alright, how do I look?P2: Loona steps out, wearing clothes similar to Octavia's.OCTAVIA: Whoa, you look wicked!LOONA: I hope I'...
HomeLuz Arc 16
I finished the last page here super last minute. I had a lot of things to juggle over the weekend.I'll try to prepare the next arc more ahead of time.
HomeLuz Arc 16 Sketch (Re-post)
I've posted this arc already, but I thought I'd go into more detail about it since I'll be continuing.You might notice that there are two statues in the first panel, one of Belos and of another individual, named Awn. This is my hint that in this AU, Philip and Caleb have a different backstory. Here, Caleb rose into power alongside Philip, but died before this story began. In case I get the opportunity to go long-term with the comic, I...
Future updates
No new comic this week, but I'll be making the next HomeLuz arc for the following week.I'm thinking one HomeLuz arc per month. I'm also trying to re-work the script for Graunty Eda so there can be a Owl House/Gravity Falls comic once per month as well.
Lower Decks (SubscribeStar)
I've started a new comic over at SubscribeStarAdult.If you're interested in mature content, consider also becoming a subscriber over at https://subscribestar.adult/swainartnsfw
